Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I have fixed as much as I could.
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Urban · Parzivaall
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Rebirth
Sports · Bloom07
That will be explained in the next chapter
Thank you. I really appreciate it.
ch 35 Agility Enhancement
Urban · Parzivaall
Your concepts are unique but I do have one thing that I think you need to use and that's grammarly. It's a good way of fixing small mistakes. It helped me a lot when I first started writing and hope it helps you too. And I am not saying your English is bad, it's very good but the small mistakes are quite hard to spot and grammarly will help with that.
And please leave some feedback on my writing quality. I am a headless chicken at the moment. Any feedback whether it be positive or negative would help a lot. Just don't be mean.
Urban · Parzivaall
Thank you.
ch 35 Agility Enhancement
Urban · Parzivaall
Thank you for the gift.
Actually that's something that i have already thought about and will add later. It will come soon. Thank you for the comment. I will definitely check out your book too.
And please leave some feedback on my writing quality. I am a headless chicken at the moment. Any feedback whether it be positive or negative would help a lot. Just don't be mean.
Urban · Parzivaall
Sorry, i am already contracted. But don't worry, i will not be locking chapters this soo.
And another thing is, that we hit 65 powerstones which means I will be uploading 2 bonus chapters next week. Our next aim is to hit 100 power stones after which I will upload three bonus chapters. All the bonus chapters will uploaded on the first day of the next week. It will be like a mass release of probably around 3 to 4 chapters. Or even five if you guys become generous and give me some gifts. Ice colad won't work from now.
Urban · Parzivaall
Thank you so much for the gift. I appreciate it a lot.
Thank you so much for the gift. I appreciate it a lot.
Thank you so much for the gift.
And you just got yourself 2 bonus chapters for next week. Thank you for the gifts. I appreciate it a lot.
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Urban · Parzivaall
👌👌
It's your choice.
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Urban · Parzivaall
There won't be
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Waking up
I Have An A.I Chip In A Post-Apocalyptic World
Urban · Parzivaall