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I’ not readi the second one this one is not good enou for a part toghngm

All I have to say right now is Nora is a despicable mommy keep keep social exspirmenting with her kids lol

so now you're going to tell me that Tanya has to wait for Nora to discover that Mia's her daughter you're really falling off as an author you can do better than this she does not have to be that f****** stupid

😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😢😩😩😩😩😩😩 you really are dragging this book out huh

do the same for me

I do love this book but you really are dragging things out too much and too long it's annoying now and stupid

no parent would ever let this go on this long it would be impossible to keep something like this from a parent if you're trying to say that they're good one cuz good parents always have their eye on their child even when their child think that their parent is not there and didn't see s*** they know exactly what happened and they tell you and you be stuck trying to figure out how you know you wasn't there I made sure of it but they know because they always watching because that's what a good parent does these are not good parents if two little five-year-old twins can pull walls over their heads like this and the same exact place not alone mentioning they were staying next to each other and only went three floors apart this is impossible and it's starting to get really stupid

I've read some of these comments and everyone is pointing out good points and I'm wondering are we just commenting for ourselves or are the writers supposed to be reading these two to help because they really need to read these for the help because you're absolutely right all of you are asking why hasn't the parents wondered why their kids keep getting mistaken by each other why haven't the parents talked about this yet like this is not a cartoon that is not how real life works but this is playing out like a cartoon I thought this was supposed to be like reality a little bit I thought we wanted to be able to make this feel like this could happen to us in real life or some way or somehow into sense of the word that it's possible to happen this book is completely feeling like Scooby-Doo and the mystery van and Rugrats you know those cartoons where the parent was never relevant when everything was going wrong but as soon as you fixed everything they came back like nothing ever happened like that doesn't it doesn't work for this story I know

I feel like messing around with this writer this book May never end

I was just feeling the same way I am starting not to want to read this book anymore like it is good but the writer is stretching things out so much that the writer is repeating them self over and over through multiple chapters about the same exact thing trying to stretch this out longer than it has to be if they are trying to make a serious out of this book this isn't the way to go, it feels like a part 2 is being force. prolonging the meeting point of the parents and the kids and findind out everything,can't be Forced it because the repeating it's self is really causing the lost of readers.

I have a question can someone answer do the writer read out comments about their stories because I am loving this book but she tends to repeat herself too many times I mean the right attends to repeat themself too many times we don't need a description of his mole and his face every single time you express he's expressing something especially when it's the same expression and we do not need a recap of every time she did something about her son revolving around her son like we don't already know that and we did not only already reveal that I hope that the writer is reading this to get notes.

he sick can't even go yell and be little her cause u can't afford to get to her 🤣🤣