Dee1inquent

1yr

Replied to Jennyash

Like I said, the plot is promising, with all the mistakes rectified, it will be a good novel. ^^

Only you: Always and forever

Urban · jenny ash

Dee1inquent

1yr

Posted

I hate giving bad reviews and normally I'm a "if you can't say anything nice, stay silent" kinda girl but this is... hmmm, the only thing promising is the plot. Think you used to wrong year, it's not set in 1991 or 1980. Too many spelling mistakes, wrong words being used (taught instead of thought), using abbreviations i.e. thou, not capitalising the start of sentences or the start of speech, in fact hardly using any capital letters at all, not for names or anything. Sorry love, I appreciate the effort you made writing this but it's not easy to read and I would not pay for this, let alone use free fps I spent time to get, the 20 minutes from reading it for the fp reward was enough for me as I don't think it would improve the more chapters I read. Sorry. 😞

Only you: Always and forever

Urban · jenny ash

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

I think he should be called Alexander, as Alexandria is a girl's name. few spelling mistakes and using wrong words like freight instead of fright but it's a good start, you have my interest. ^^

ch 0 4 THE MAFIA'S SON

A SURROGATE FOR THE MAFIA LORD

Urban · Imma Nicx

Dee1inquent

1yr

Replied to Dee1inquent

Me again, sorry, I'm tired and chatty! King Desmond... there is an oldish British sitcom called The Desmonds which has a character called Pork Pie... yes, it's also a food, pork pies are so nice!! Mira reminds me of my friend Krasimira, not a food, just a really lovely friend with a pretty name and nickname! *munches on Ferrero Rocher* ^^

Second son of satan

Fantasy · JennyBlaze

Dee1inquent

1yr

Posted

I like this novel, it's a good plot and I like the characters, although the ML makes me think of devilled eggs (sorry 😞). Well, seeing the name Benedict makes me think of eggs benedict, I think a lot about food obviously! Just waiting to find a ML called Caesar, Ferrero, Rocher or ermmm, kitkat. ^^

Second son of satan

Fantasy · JennyBlaze

Dee1inquent

1yr

Posted

I love this novel, its so good. Well written, fantastic characters and plot, easy to immerse yourself, 5/5 from me! ^^

Butterflies and Pins

History · Raksha1

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

*mourns poor kitty cat*

ch 14 Fourteen

Blackmailing his runaway bride

Urban · Lola_Ben

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the reminder, I still have 'Bride of the Water God' to read! ^^

ch 0 3 Chapter 3

Butterflies and Pins

History · Raksha1

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

Wait, what? Garlic? Hmmm... going to see if Maltesers have the safe effect!!!

ch 11 The dinner and the Don - III

Belonging To The Darkness

Urban · Inara_Me

Dee1inquent

1yr

Posted

Hmmm, I needed a fantasy novel to push my fantasy genre FPs at, this is not bad at all! Carry on! ^^

Becoming the King of A New Filthy World

Fantasy · Alex_morg

Dee1inquent

1yr

Posted

This is a really good novel, more people should be reading it! It's well written, great characters and plot! Dark haired aloof ML too, me likey! Gets 5/5 from me! ^^

Kissing Hellfire: Marry Me, Evil Lord

Fantasy · macy_mori

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

ch 0 8 The Jack of Spades

A Courtyard of Roses

Fantasy · twelvewstars

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

Yes, my cats have FOMO!! ^^

ch 35 The breakfast-cafe living room.

Allow me to love fictiously

Urban · Miss_Elated03

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

What a fantastic chapter, definitely worth the wait! ^^

ch 0 1 A Dance for The Dead (II)

Aithne: Daughter of the Flame

Fantasy · Harleeyah24

Dee1inquent

1yr

Commented

I think that the Aion stone brought the ancestor of the king and the Rose Knight (a female) together in the past and it's doing the same thing now between Maximus and errrr, the FL (can't remember her name, only remembered his because of Gladiator). She sees his ancestor in her dreams as wispy is still sharing her body so her soul is still intact and the way I read it, he wasn't surprised that she had a stance of a Knight, so he probably has seen her ancestor in his dreams... since he was a young boy maybe. That's what I think anyway, it's no doubt wrong! ^^