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Writing the review after reading 1000 chapters. TRANSLATION: The translation is not bad. There are quite a few mistakes here and there that will prevent you from being totally immersed but it is not something that will ruin your overall experience. The main problem is the conveying of emotions and gestures. The writer has the habit of explaining evey single thing the characters encounter. One single action may take upto several chapters just to be explained. There are many chapters where the writer is just yapping about with no direction where the story is going. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The book is just a repetition of the same storyline with different characters. The same thing happens to the MC every time, being underestimated and scorned and at the end he ultimately ends up on top. In the last 1000 chapters there is no story development and many questions are still unanswered. The main premise of the story is a term that I discovered here "face-slapping". The MC's action has no consequences as he steps on everyone he meets. He is also surrounded by many cultivators leagues above him but there is not a single time he is defeated. Admittedly he can be said to possess an OP power but it is mentioned he cannot defeat those many leagues above him and he still manages to come out on top. I continued on the premise that it will get better but it is still the same. There is no development on the MC's constitution. Why was he poisoned? Who poisoned him?. But everything is not as bland as it seems. If you enjoy reading novels with no huddles for the MC and no stepping zones for him to overcome this novel is for you. CHARACTER DESIGN: The main character is somewhat written above average. His actions are entertaining, likeable making you root for him. The problem comes to the other characters, they are what is called NPC's. All of them do not have any thinking abilities whatsoever. The MC solves every single problem and they don't bring any contribution to the table. The MC does everything and they get to enjoy the advantages. UPDATING STABILITY: I started reading after the novel after it was finished so I do not have any qualms about its update. WORLD BACKGROUND; The Master teacher continent is said to be massive but not as massive I think it is portrayed as. How massive does it have to be where an alliance as big as The Myriad Alliance is just a drop of water in the sea. It is just like the Storyline. It is very convenient that everytime there is a bigger fish. The MC cultivates to a higher realm he finds himself in place where he is a small fry he cultivates higher and the same thing happens with no development.