Webnovel Author: FastSquirrel622

yo shameless author's 5 star review is here as I said in synopsis and in the fanfic that suggestions and Advice are always welcome since it's my first time writing Thank you. -----------Squirrel Out

Spirit of Vengeance in One Piece

Anime & Comics · FastSquirrel622

FastSquirrel622

12d

Commented

I am first yayy

ch 0 1 The End And The Beginning

Spirit of Vengeance in One Piece

Anime & Comics · FastSquirrel622

FastSquirrel622

1mth

Commented

make the staff a secret as it will be odd for him and let the staff have a shapeshift function like changing into a ring or tatoo you can also use tatoo for hiding the wings if you like or if it's helpful please respond to my both comments and update faster. ---squirrel out

And one more question is related to the staff! The staff should be made as a secret weapon and not used too often. And take Ollivander's wand in his place. Or will МС use a staff?

The angel who conquered the world

Book&Literature · Filormony

FastSquirrel622

1mth

Commented

you should insert an evolution element for example first a normal angel with basic powers then leader angel then angel commander then arch angel etc give him more powers with every evolution and his wings number and size should increase with each evolution and you should also consider his body size when increasing wings length because it doesn't make sense his wings are the same size from start till end even if he is a normal angel you should give a range (min size - Max size) for every evolution. ---squirrel out

Do you think it's worth awakening his race completely and immediately? Or gradually?

The angel who conquered the world

Book&Literature · Filormony

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 124 123. Stupid Fox

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 124 123. Stupid Fox

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 115 114. Everyone Is Villain

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Replied to DevilDarkness

yo Devil do you think author should take a week's break before restart uploading 2chps per day. ------Squirrel Out

ch 113 112. Terrified Kaliya

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 113 112. Terrified Kaliya

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

FastSquirrel622

8mth

Commented

Yo author what do you think about taking a weeks's break and then try to upload 2chps per day you'll get the rest and we'll get the increased do think about my suggestion. ....... Squirrel Out

ch 113 112. Terrified Kaliya