bookstoread72

6h

Commented

overall I like the story... but honestly this chapter is poorly written

ch 114 Chapter 114: "The Potter Encounter"

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

bookstoread72

1mth

Commented

if you started a patreon... i would support. please continue this story!!!

ch 51 Crunchy sponge

Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix

bookstoread72

3mth

Posted

I've been keeping up with the story. it's good. I enjoy it. for anyone reading this review. know that this story is an enjoyable read. If I may offer some critique. 1. it's not dark enough. this is the Shinobi world. people are killed and die all the time. realism and edginess. weariness in characters. manipulation. hiding abilities, backstabbing. it's lacking severely in this department. even with the whole Minato death and danzo thing. 2. kushina loses her Chakra and she suddenly becomes a helpless woman that needs to be coddled and cared for by her prepubscent son. she has no regards for her kids safety. no attempt to help him succeed so he can protect himself. she's like some ditsy wallflower that's living in some romcom 3. maybe try reading wind of calamity... see how the author narrates the character growing in power and technique. how realistic he makes it and how easy it is to follow along and invest in their growth. could help you a lot

(Kaito)

Anime & Comics · Tilct

bookstoread72

5mth

Commented

absolutely brilliant story. I loved every second of it. thank you for bringing so much joy into my life.

ch 140 Chapter 140

Focused Fire (ATLA)

Anime & Comics · arg3nt

bookstoread72

5mth

Commented

this story is toooo good!!! I beseech u too drag it out as long as humanly possible. in an ideal world... I would still be reading this in 2050 on my death bed.

ch 136 Chapter 136

Focused Fire (ATLA)

Anime & Comics · arg3nt

bookstoread72

5mth

Commented

this story is getting too close to finishing for my liking. Can u please drag it outttt?? I don't want it to end

ch 134 Chapter 134

Focused Fire (ATLA)

Anime & Comics · arg3nt

bookstoread72

6mth

Commented

I freaking love this book!!! reading a chapter is the second best way to wake up in the morning. the first... well...

ch 127 Chapter 127

Focused Fire (ATLA)

Anime & Comics · arg3nt

bookstoread72

6mth

Commented

I just realized how much of a foreshadow this is.

Thankfully, Azula was more amused than offended, waving it off casually. Zuko thought he imagined a some color in his sister's cheeks, but he definitely noticed her strange smirk. "It's alright, Xing. I suppose the downsides of glory is something for us to consider in the future…"

Focused Fire (ATLA)

Anime & Comics · arg3nt

bookstoread72

8mth

Commented

Is this fic officially dropped?? honestly miss it so much

ch 50 Stud

Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix

bookstoread72

10mth

Commented

just read the whole story in like 5 hours. loved ittt! amazing work. thanks so much!!

ch 263 Choice

Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi

Anime & Comics · nyawdao

bookstoread72

11mth

Replied to bookstoread72

is this fic gonna be updated? please let us know. cause i check almost daily... itll save me some time lol

ch 50 Stud

Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix

bookstoread72

1yr

Commented

2 girls is good. but not big harem

ch 19 Vote: Harem or no Harem

Fate/Surviving in Ancient Greece

Anime & Comics · LordOfCactus

bookstoread72

1yr

Commented

here are my predictions. 1. MCs persian has a familial relation to Giovannis persian. 2. Becky will become a coordinator 3. MC will set up a stall to sell his wares very soon 4. MC is gonna have a run in with some big shot-- maybe an elite 4 or something whos gonna take a minor interest in MC in the next few years--- before his journey.

ch 50 Stud

Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix

bookstoread72

1yr

Commented

the only thing i hated is the rating system for shinobi. u had the god, half god and then the legendary or whatever it was.... I hate those kinda fics because they usually turn out to be power trips... everything else has been fun to read though

ch 15 Chapter 15: Planning