Graca67

13d

Posted

ending is too abrupt. no closure for the characters. xuanyan seven should not have been brought up again if the author didnt have any plans if expounding on Qin Ran's revenge against phantom.

The Older Man Is Addicted To Pampering His Wife

Urban · Ideal Belly

Graca67

1mth

Commented

chu yi cen still had "her" back facing them. should be "his back facing them"

Yan Li glared at him, then turned to look at Chu Yi Chen, who still had her back facing them: "Yi Chen, what are you thinking?"

The Ghost Face Royal Highness Is My Husband

History · Zhao Si Xiao Niu

Graca67

1mth

Commented

gender mixup for Jiang Siyue. brother but becomes "she".

The other was that Jiang Siyue was also Chu Yichen's close friend in life and death, and was also his teacher's junior brother who came from the same sect as him. She was the hall master of the martial arts world's Wonderful Words Hall, and all the news of the Shenghan Continent was within her grasp.