Albi_M - Profile

plz repost the raw link again but do it like this *raw*link*plz*

If I was an author this would look like a book that i would write. The story is good but the writing needs a little bit more attention, I think u were in a too much hurry to release it or got lost in thinking about the story that u didn't spent much time on the writing, I'm sure you can correct it and make it more comfortable for more people to read in the future if u can review the previous chapters and correct it. Overall this book is good and I hope that in the future u can keep up with the updates. Sincerely reader😁

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