ame_benie - Profile

This is the second book I'm reading written by this author and since I never dropped a review for the other book, I couldn't help write this one down. The writing style has indeed changed, the grammar and tenses are better than the other book. Even the English fluency has improved. The story idea being different from the BL idea that the author had embraced on their previous book, and being a straight couple is promising and since the book is on it's early chapters, I can't say more about it. Charmaine being a five year old and with such a mindset is kind of mind-blowing and Charlotte is a little harsh with her at the first but changes as the chapters go on, showing a mother figure that Charmaine needs now that she is far away from her parents. I hope their relationship gets better because I kind of like Charlotte's cold attitude that she shows from time to time. Hoping to read more of her in the future chapters. I'd like the author to tell us more about her parents, why they were killed, you know, a little background story would help a lot. Anyways, in general, the story is pretty nice but you will be hearing from me as I read future chapters, 🤞hopefully the author updates this book on a regular basis.