Badges 3
Moments 22
she is very lucky
"Look Miss, if you don't mind I will marry Miss and be the father of the baby you are carrying," said the doctor.
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Urban · Vanila_Michelle
poor Ivy
"Miss Ivy's pregnancy is very vulnerable, she could miscarry if her condition still doesn't improve for the next few days," explained the doctor.
..not continue..
Urban · Vanila_Michelle
up to you. i don't care
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
i found too much words oh from chapter 3 to chapter 5
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
too long ummm
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
no comma after what for?
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
using dot after before " the punctuation is make confused
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
too much words oh in this chapter
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
it is not need using #### or something like that
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
try to improve your grammar and chinese language
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
I don't understand with your story. Make me really confused
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
what the ...
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
where is the dialogue tag?
Areumdaum Yeoja
Lucia bermata bulat berwarna coklat gelap, hidung mancung, warna kulit kuning langsat, dan bibir tipisnya berwarna merah muda seperti bunga mawar. Sedangkan Diana bermata sipit berwarna hitam, hidung mancung, warna kulit agak gelap, namun memiliki bentuk bibir yang hampir sama dengan Lucia.
CEO's Revenge
Urban · Vienna_Gu
duh maunya apa sih Dee?
Sebenarnya hari itu Arya hendak mengumumkan pernikahannya dengan Diana Kartika, tapi tiba-tiba dia mengacaukan acaranya.
CEO's Revenge
Urban · Vienna_Gu
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Proud Chef
Reincarnation Of Mrs. Chef : Like A Fool
Urban · Vanila_Michelle