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Seriously, I read this a long time ago and I remember liking it, but bro, what is this? The writing format is horrible, you can't tell who is speaking, character development doesn't even exist

I had read this story before and saw that new chapters were released, I was wondering why I dropped this story. Then I remembered, zero character development, I see that the author expresses emotions in the characters, but there was development of the world and the MC, it looks like a child wants to write A story with him as the main character.

Sincerely? I still read up to chapter 24, but this story isn't for me, MC sympathizes with Nami, even with her horrible personality and Coby suffering as the prota's handyman,But if you like Chinese stories, this is for you

Well... I think it's obvious that it's a translation, however, in general it's better than most of the traditions on this site, I like the proposal of this ff, I hope it doesn't focus too much on something serious, Since the MC system is very op, anyway, in general I liked it, just some grammatical errors in the tradition, MC name, characters, etc. I'm waiting for more🙏🏾

Sinceramente? Foi uma das melhores histórias que eu já li neste site, se a estrutura da escrita podesse ser melhorada e separada em mais parágrafos, ficaria menos cansativo de se ler e mais imersivo e fácil de acompanhar, no geral a história é boa, espero que o autor volte a postar mais capítulo

I read it completely, and honestly? I regret it, the MC's attitudes are not coherent or even follow a thin line of logic, Until the arc of the Ben 10 universe improved, and if he had stayed there the story might have been saved, but that's it, he goes back to his world and returns to being the same stupid person. I was looking for a story about the Ben 10 universe, out of pure nostalgia, but I didn't like it and apparently everyone hated the way it was executed, the idea is good, but that's it...🤷🏾‍♂️