Crying_crying123

Crying_crying123

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Crying_crying123
1 years ago
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The characters are nice especially Jian Tang wanna see Leng Rui being smitten with Li Jie though loved to see the future updates.

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1 years ago
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1 years ago
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Chase_Xavier_123. Webnovel should just fix this bug 🐛 😭

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Crying_crying123
1 years ago
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Liked the story and plot. Writing Quality Not bad might need some editing) "It said your first book is the worst when it comes to writing. So I mean it's a really great first effort. The mystery is written well. No infor dumping happening But sometimes there's too much lack of information. I want to know when Mc transmigrated? not for it to be finished in or two lines and then brushed under rug in name of change in personality after awakening. Story Development - It's nice but I kinda like the fast pace. Character Design-I like Mc how he actually thinks when put in nearly death situation doesn't give a damn about destiny. Thinks about taking advantage of the situation knows when he is being insulted but sucks it up until the cards turn. But I mean I thought he was young not 27 but like 21ish. Updating Stability -Every single second you don't spend on writing is a second wasted. There's no bigger lie than this. Cause you got a life. Always Quality over Quantity so do it with your pace. World Background It's a mystery to me still but a good mystery I wanna know how these vampires got cursed? how mc transmigrated? what's is his past? So many questions. And if you want the answer to it read the damn book lazy people. Like right now read it.

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Crying_crying123
2 years ago
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Thank you for your review

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Crying_crying123
2 years ago
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Hello everyone this is my first novel. This novel follows our MC Li Jie who is an introvert. It's hard for him to deal with feelings be it his own or others. Next character we deal with is the male lead Hai Ruo Feng who knows how to manipulate the situation to his favor he is mostly hidden in mystery but gives the feeling that you know him to well. Please follow the journey of the novel to see their relationship.

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    Forgiven or Forgotten

    LGBT+ R18 WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY BETRAYAL REVENGE CEO POWERFULCOUPLE FACESLAPPING MAFIA BIGSHOT

    Li Jie the ice king president of the Li coperation had a past, who doesn't in this age. But the past left the shadow in Li Jie's life dragging him, draining him. He wasn't the helpless youth from the past but it was still weighing him down. This is his journey to fight back and free himself from past. __________ "I think I am in love with you." Li Jie look at the man the foam running down from his mouth to his fingers he held the brush with. "Mhm...mou iniot...." He tried to curse but it came out unclear, he started the tap in hurry washing his face and mouth. "Who proposes the first time they meet." "This is our second meeting, we have been together since last night." The 4-5th to be exact. The idiot spoke, ignoring that it didn't make it any better for Li Jie to accept. __________ Xia family's main house, "You won't believe who i met yesterday, Li Jie." "That coward." "What is he doing after divorcing our Ah' Ming?" "Do you really have to bring up that bad star." *Clink* A porcelain tea cup shattered breaking into pieces. The person sitting on the host chair stood up. "Father?" Mrs Xia who had been silent hearing other gossip tried to appease the elderly. "That bad luck star, shouldn't enter this house again." "Yes, father. Xia Ming has finally married a good girl don't let him destroy the peace." ____________ 1) The image above doesn't belong to me. 2) Please don't hate on the story. 3) This is a Lgbtq+ story 4) Any relations with name, character, places is sheer coincidence.

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