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a posse ad esse

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No, because i’ll be this teacher. I have no patience.

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From time to time, Julius gaped at Sunny's lack of knowledge and relevant experience. However, he had a good attitude and an endless enthusiasm for teaching. Whenever Sunny stumbled, he would patiently slow down and allow his student to catch up.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marieeena
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Act stupid. People avoid them…been there i guess.

Every one of them wanted to talk with fellow Sleepers. They wanted to discuss their Nightmares, their future journey into the Dream Realm, and everything in between. They wanted to ask questions. They wanted to be asked questions. They wanted to discuss something important or just chit-chat about stupid things.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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marieeena
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Oh, here we go…men writing women.

Currently, she was stretching her arms above her head, clearly bored and sleepy. The gesture forced the thin fabric to tighten, provocatively accentuating her full breasts.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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marieeena
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Leave the poor sleepy god alone.

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[Shadow God stirs in his eternal slumber.]

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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Replied to Kamog

I’m talking about the personality. And to each his own.

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My Necromancer Class

My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

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Fantasy · Aero182

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Replied to Maryam_Aldariya

Hey, Maryam! How's your day going? Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/106myMs0euBtiloC4mLTjOedTc4XvM7sxIP7V0daFpKU/edit?usp=sharing

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Before I provide my review, please do not judge the book by its rating. My rating is not the measure for you to read this book. My thoughts and opinions about this may vary from your own interpretation. Regardless, here's my review: I'm not a huge fan of romance, and I started reading the book to challenge myself to keep on reading. In all honesty, the story is your usual werewolf love story. However, I could see through the paragraphs the love and effort the author would like to convey. The writing style, including the grammar and structure, is not something I would praise, and it needs a lot of improvement. As the story progress, the presentation gets better. There is also a reason why I stopped at Chapter 10 when the story is getting deep and exciting, I just can't relate and connect with the characters. And I always look at the flow and transition of actions and paragraphs, and I'm not a fan of the way it was presented here. The characters need more in-depth personas for the readers to root for and connect. I do not root for Grace as she lacks personality and cannot seem to go outside her damsel in distress moments. Overall, the story is good and has potential. I'm sure it will develop since the journey is still starting. Keep up, author! Thanks for sharing your story. (I also made a separate and not-so-in-depth review of this story—I reviewed 10 chapters each, so if you'd like to have a copy, do let me know).

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Why do i have a feeling that mr mc will get into that level?

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My Necromancer Class

My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

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He seems pretty chill with the revelation. I don’t want to be suspicious but 👀

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My Necromancer Class

My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

marieeena
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And the secret has been revealed. Hopefully, sully is someone he can trust.

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My Necromancer Class

My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

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Fantasy · Aero182

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