Bravo 👏 👏 .. very well written.. its so wonderful to have seen the characters grow and feel.like you have become involved on the essence of their lives. It has also been a pleasure to have seen your writing evolve just as you have grown alongside the story you have written.. Proof read this would sell off the shelves very easily. You really should be very proud of yourself. Thank you for letting us into your world. I'd love to read more side stories.. what happened to Callum and Lincoln.. how did Lucifers change after the possession affect his rule over hell.. did Heaven go unchallenged in her reign.. did Zarin ever find love..who has possession of Hazel's human soul if she died and became a demon, did part of her go to heaven heaven... was there truly ever no disaster or strife in the water demon lands, surely theyd have Kelpies etc causing mischief...so many questions, so many possibilities.. But once again, thank you, marvellously written.
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