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sushikiller

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2022-05-12 Joined Bhutan

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i click continue reading and then it lead me here. Literally forgot what chap I was

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Fusion Reincarnation

Fusion Reincarnation

Fantasy · Sageash

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sushikiller
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you added the fish part. Cat would be so proud

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it is, i believe

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Calamity Rank Drifter

Calamity Rank Drifter

Sci-fi · Ayato_Suzuki

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ch 0 -1 Prologue-1: Loris.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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dam, his potential if only he had the courage and positivity

The fortune of being blessed with great genes. Paradoxically, what Loris had not considered determining obsessed him every day of the past three years. Since his abject failure broke his pride and shattered his seemingly boundless urge to conquer.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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there is no hope without life, no will without hope, and no effort without wil-

Staring at the void, lying a step away, Loris wondered how he got there. Was there ever any hope?

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

sushikiller
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that was literally traumatizing

Closing his eyes briefly, he had visions of the nightmare that haunted him day and night. Of his young self drowning in a virtual lake. Each blink reminded him of how scared he was of dying. Pathetic.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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stratum

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Even on the outskirts of a city whose hidden heart remained exclusive to the upper caste, some buildings towered over other infrastructures sixty metres high at best. An embodiment of the meritorious' privilege for whom the rules differed.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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rip

The resulting trauma would scar him for eternity.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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fudge, he should have set it as an ocean instead, if he's just gonna skip the beginners level

Loris was overly reckless and prideful at that time, like any other young Merigenians. In his first fully immersive virtual swimming session, he disobeyed his mother's instructions and set up a lake instead of a kindergarten pool. In the panic, he forgot it was nothing but virtual.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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wasted my dam tears for this kid, dem

The young child was Loris. He had yet to celebrate his 5th birthday, and it was one of his first experiences with virtual reality.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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hello darkness my old friend

His body sank further into the depths. Where light had no place.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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the kid is a fighterrr

Every new breath of air was a victory, with his nose now mostly submerged. In great dismay, he swallowed a mouthful and spat out some of the water, trying to suck in immense lumps of air.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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a creative and expressive way to describe drowning

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Tears rolled down his little cheeks as he tried his utmost to swim to the nearest land. He somehow floated, but could barely keep his head above water as the waves he created threw him back and forth. His agitated moves didn't help as tiny water jets poured through his nostrils, forcing him to swallow a noseful. He coughed up the murky liquid through the same orifice, nearly choking on it.

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Sci-fi · PurplePinata

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demn, who left their baby there

A child screamed. This spreading despair would make any heart quiver. Yet nobody came. The wilderness prevailed over the lake and its surroundings.

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