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This novel is pretty impressive, considering that I’ve only read up to Chapter 5. I’ll give my basis for my review below- Writing Quality- A few typos here and there, less in the first chapter and more as it goes on. Nothing too jarring. Four stars because the flow can be improved in some places, placements of words and a few adjustments in prose is all that the author needs as he already has a good grip on the writing style. Updating stability- the stability is good, but four stars because four chapters a week is not exceptional, especially considering that as an uncontracted Author(as of this review), he can go below the 1.5k word mark. Story development- 4.5 stars, this is where this story starts to become good. It is fast-paced and manages to pull the readers in, but as I have said, the clunky grammatical arrangements along with typos takes the immersion out sometimes. It is still one of the better ones out there, try it if you like a novel where things happen every chapter without the need for padding. Characters- 5 stars, this is a criteria wherein the story standa out from the rest, becoming a veritable Casanova among the skirt chasers, a gigachad among chad. Characters are interesting and well-written, for the most part. It is still too early to definitively say they are good, but it sure is going that way. World background- 4 to 4.5 stars, it is mysterious and inviting, but not interpreted or exposed as well as I would have liked. But maybe that’s just me, the world itself is unique though. Overall, a 4.5. Try it if you like a novel where dynamics and contrasts exists right from the get go instead of the overdone trope of one dimensional characters and solo mcs.

The premise is fresh and interesting. The synopsis pulled me in and I was pleasantly surprised to find the characters, worldbuilding and storytelling to be top notch. Will watch this novel and see where it goes!

The contrast in personality of the characters brings life and depth to the world. I highly recommend this book! Interested to see where this novel goes!

This novel shows how all of us who dream of living in a fantasy world may mot necessarily be what we’ve always envisioned. It’s a thought provoking and interesting novel from the get go!

Wow, the comedy and romance here is quirky and sometimes deep. It’s a refreshing take on the romance genre and I can’t wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work Author!

I loved the novel. The story and characters are top notch. The worldbuilding as of now seems really interesting too! I just hope the author decides to pick it up again.

This is a really nice novel. I read the synopsis and decided to give it a go. I was pleasantly surprised to find a gem. It’s got good plot and world-building along with interesting characters. I really recommend it!

Reallllly loving it so far. hope the mc gets really powerful too. I keep thinking about how his brothers will be I will be following along author

Im really liking the story so far. I hope it goes like this, the mc seems like a cold bastard and i like that. just hope there’s no romance and harem and all that. keep it up ill he watching!