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-Not Strong Bastards(if you know what I mean)
HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale
TV · Giver_of_Crabs
Hey, you are doing pretty well. The flow of the story is interesting, and I think the plot is going well so far, but I think at some point, it will definitely start to get a bit dull. You can keep going as you are, but at some point, you’ll need to spice it up a bit, do something a bit unexpected. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
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Snakes and Ladders (A Hollywood SI/OC)
Movies · Archonstine
Couldn’t agree more. I’ve read a ton of Harry Potter fanfiction, but it is one of the best I’be read.
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2. Create two separate versions of the story.
Reborn As Draco Malfoy: Lord Slytherin
Book&Literature · The_Book_Addict
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Adrien in Hufflepuff and Aurelius in Slytherin. Spice it up.
Also, what house do you think Adrien and Aurelius will end up in? Comment your thought down below.
HP: The Legendary Arithmancer
Book&Literature · Stormeyy
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No! Adrien dating someone older than him is kinda hot!
HP: The Legendary Arithmancer
Book&Literature · Stormeyy
I think the best thing you could do with the story is to add a few twists to it. It is still a good story, but I think it would be in your best interest and the readers best interest for there to be some newer concepts. The idea of the reincarnated daughter is good, but I believe you still have the ability to improve upon this story. Take your time don’t rush. Use this as an opportunity to become a better writer and story teller. Keep up the good work though.
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Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+
TV · Kagetanehiruko
I love both. You should at least do one or the oth er
Like GX or 5D?
Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time
Anime & Comics · Glace