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i didnt read it cuz i know it will be fucking trash but that synopsis gave me a good laugh. . . . . .. . . ........................................

whoever wrote this needs help . . . . . . ..........................................................................................................

the writing is decent yet weird, wouldn't be surprised if this novel was AI edited at least. the story itself is going in a direction i dont care to follow. mc is growing up, and despite being no where near his home, he chooses to go to middle school at the same place harry potter does. he weirdly integrates himself with harry potter, and basically makes harry his lackey. its weird and boring, and almost certainly because the author cant figure out how to right original work so hes trying to stay as canonical as possible. but overall its just boring

this is another AI fic spammer just fyi. all the novels will be trash and inhuman. . . . . . . . .................................................

5 staring a loser that is spamming AI stories. please tell me you are a bot and not real

AI BOT AI BOT AI BOT AI BOT loser has multiple accounts where he spams AI fanfics... he is literally flooding the website with trash. please report this loser so the one mod that might work on this dogshit website bans him. his other account is named AlexanderBlackfyre, and this one is Perseus_Blackfyre. they both spam the same AI garbage and anyone with half a brain should be able to tell its AI just from the synopsis

can you please stop spamming the website with trash? . . . . . . . . ........................................................................

come out? from the synopsis i can only guess that the mc is a closeted homosexual and his clan being very supportive is begging him to come out, metaphorically speaking?

ch 240 and literally nothing has happened. the person who wrote this must be out of their fucking mind honestly. the chapters are long too. hundreds of thousands of words and somehow literally nothing has happened. everyone still thinks mc is useless, mc still only goes to TMI and reads memories, nothing else. wtf?

its written well enough, but the story development is just weird. i dont understand the choice to make kakashi a 5 year old if you were going to so quickly start a romantic relationship with someone. it only makes everything weird IMO. the relationship itself was incredibly forced due to that chapter where Yennefer and Kakashi where in that illusion world for years. like.. cool they spent 10 years together but the readers dont see any of that past 1 chapter. it felt like you went from 0 to 100 just so the author could hurry along a romance because they couldn't figure out how to write one properly. honestly, with the age of the character, the weird story development, the horrible romance, and nothing interesting happening i cant imagine why anyone would want to read past chapter 15 or so

its just a really odd paring for fanfics if im being honest. there is almost no reason for this to exist and reading it just feels weird. i only got to the robbery scene where the 10 y/o mc dressed in a "ninja outfit" takes out 2 armed robbers. the conversations are robotic, and the plot progression just dosent make any sense. it would be like if someone mixed peppa pig and harry potter. you just cant help but wonder why the fuck someone decided to write this. also, this has 100% been written or at least semi-written by AI. looking back on the grammar and conversations it just isnt real. it feels like a retarded robot wrote this novel.

far, far , far, far too slow. mc is in the original gameshow for like 300+ chapters. then for the rest of the novel its just him jumping between other gameshows/talkshows with his new group that was formed within the original gameshow.

the author is trying too hard to make a harem appear normal. and hes adding future harem members all the time. the updates are once or twice a week and basically every chapter is the author setting up creepy child romance plots where the mc acts like an oblivious retard until they are at a certain age so he doesn't appear to be a child groomer. almost 60 chapters and and most of them are about that. that or just 'training'. almost no interesting chapters, and the mcs child harem is just fucking creepy. a good concept of minato being mc with some unique powers, but ruined by the pedo harem.

bad writing quality. the author briefly mentions the story "belongs entirely to the original author." and due to the horrendous grammar im just gonna assume it was a chinese MTL. the author also posts like 10 other chinese novels every day at the same time, its just annoying honestly. going out of your way to flood other sites with chinese trash.

I was sceptical at first, noticing the amount of chapters that revolved around harry/lucas early years of life before Hogwarts, but I was pleasantly surprised this time. The writing quality is very good, the chapters are almost never boring. It gets a little too masturbatory it regard to how people react to the mc's genius, they go too far imo but that's a small complaint. so long as the update schedule is decent this should be a good fanfic.

it feels like the author used an AI when describing the movies/audience reactions. im not 100% but almost every time the author describes what was great about these movies he gets it so fucking wrong. for example, the dark knight, was incredible because of the joker, but in this novel its all about good the story itself was (it reads like a fake review) and the joker is mentions like 2 times. its the same for pretty much every movie/tv show this novel touches upon, everything about it just feels off in a non-human way (AI writing). either that or the author wasnt a fan of the movies hes using in this novel, so hes just getting it all wrong due to that. idk.

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.