ch 198 Chapter 198: Piece of History
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
I honestly like reading it but the repetition in the writing is annoying. After 1100 chapters, you can no longer ignore it when the author sais, "one should know...'info dump'...",or "yes,bla bla bla", and the worst of all 6 different paragrpahs after that explaining the same thing with different words. like we get it.You also don't need 4 chapters to explains how a fleet is moving to land with the same exact words used abuot every other fleet and army thats about to fight you don't need 4 chapters for that. Also the "play time is over" comment about obviously people 'fighting' using '30%'of their power then next chapter after that comment, boom 2 paragraphs describing how the 'good guys' absolutely dumpestered the enemy...Then we have the usual grammatical errors still, and ofcourse the plot armour which is, 'fine'. 'Solid' 7/10...maybe
Fantasy · lumydee
pretty sure chicken god was reffering to the character brendan? and some confusion arose and he though that character is the personofication of the author into the story. like the one guy that made the metal gear solid games that appears in the game... :P
Fantasy · Draekai
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ch 198 Chapter 198: Piece of History
Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
Fantasy · Demonic_angel