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Keep up the amazing work Gurll. I can't believe you have come so far with your writing, maybe one day you will be at the top of the power rankings!

Wowww, I knew you could do it! Keep working at it hard and you will have thousands of readers in no time. I love what you are doing with the characters and how descriptive you are being. Keep up the great work!!!

I-N-C-R-E-D-I-B-L-E Wow, this is awesome, keep up the great work and I can't wait to see you rise to the top of webnovel! Keep at it Author.

WOW. Just WOW. Haven't read something like this in a while. The world building is fantastic and let's not even mention the character design. Simply Sublime!!!

This is a review of chapter 1 since that is all that is currently out. I didn't know what to expect going into this. But in the end, I came out satisfied. From an enjoyment point of view, I think this story has a lot of potential right off the bat. I am curious to see how the two will grow their relationship. And I NEED to know more about what lies in the astral state. Those entities are set up to be great threats so you better bring out their full horror! From a grammatical point of view. I think it's nearly perfect as is. The only thing I could be picky about is some small grammar points like punctuation and spelling. Some words could've also been used better but it still is fully comprehensible. I think proofreading once or twice will make this the best up-and-coming story!

Honest reviews are appreciated. I think the idea will shake readers down to their core as the later chapters set in! I know you will all love it as I continue to write it so hang in there until we reach that stage!