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This was beyond stupid move from the mc unless he has some trick like he's a shadow clone or something. Is it just me that feels the pacing of the story became wayyyyy too slow? I mean I understand adding details, but do we really care about who are the nobles in Suna? it really takes 3~5 chapters for something to happen to progress the story now, I guess the author ran out of ideas (which is fine this happens to every writer) so I suggest starting the Canon after this promotion mission or to take time thinking about new ideas.

anbu and root do this all the time why are people mad about this? do they really think all ninjas act like Naruto(the Jesus of his world)? so author don't pay attention to comments coming from delusionals that think ninjas shouldn't kill, that's literally their whole purpose.

this proves how necessary Danzo's root were, he basically did all the dirty work of the village, just imagine Danzo with the talent of Minato or hiruzen the other villages won't stand a chance. The leaf hidden village suffered from a poor and weak management that didn't know how to take advantage of their human resources, the village had multiple kage level at the same period( White fang, Hiruzen, Jiraya, Tsunade, Orochimaru, Minato, Fugaku), they also had the strongest clans in their world(Senju, Uchiha, Hyuga, their allies the Uzumaki clan). I always think about what would happened if someone with common sense was actually the Hokage at that period, the other villages won't stand a chance even if they went all together.

this chapter explained why Fujin in the previous chapter didn't avoid such an obvious formation good work author. and I think i know why the sealmaster was surprised, maybe the clone that used the wind jutsu was actually one of fujin summons but in disguise, so fujin actually didn't use much Chakra he only used the wind vaccum and the fire combination with the wind.

I mean it's obvious that they will use a formation if four of them split up in four different directions, that was pretty easy to understand.

great chapter, Fujin strength progress is faster when there's a huge pressure on his head, but when he's inside the village he subconsciously gets comfortable and slows his progress. I always thought about having the mc in a village like Suna or Kiri that will put him in a huge danger, it will be cool if someone wrote a story about surviving in these 2 villages especially Kiri.

great chapter

nah the author did as dirty we thought first it will be water based summon, then a wolf, and ended with a Hyena. I see that you're trying to play mind games with us 😂👍

great chapter. and having wolves as summons is cool. I thought he will choose a summon with water element to cover his weakness in under water combat.

great chapter

great chapter. Fujin joining anbu is a good move if I remember right anbu receive special treatment maybe he will be able to enter higher levels of the library or at least he will get rewards doing risky missions for the village.

great chapter. the shameless Fujin with a comeback once again, in my personal opinion I think the 3rd needs to pay him one forbidden jutsu and the payment for 2 or 3 S rank missions😂

taking this mission was a stupid move from the mc of course other villages will target konoha after what happened to the Uchiha this is basic common sense this is literally the worst time to leave the village he should have acted hurt by his teammate death and stayed in the village, I hope after this it will be a time skip I think the you spend enough time with him as 11 years old the story needs to move now a skip of a year or more will be good.

great chapter

good decision from the author he can't help her in this situation it's better to just go with the flow he's week now and saving a young Uchiha filled with hatred and keeping her around him is pure stupidity we know Uchiha get influenced by the sharingan and it may even change their personality and just like the author said if she know about the mankegyo with her mind full of hatred I don't doubt she will kill him not like she loves him to death at this point, so it's a good choice made by the mc and it's very rational and I hope he continues using his brain in the future.

I will trust the author because he said there will be no romance in the story and saving her doesn't bring anything to fujin even if he saved her that won't change anything in the story it will only make him a target (we know how arrogant the Uchiha are especially if they're young they won't stop talking about revenge if they survive), he better continue training hard than wasting his time on something he can't even change right now.

since when did he start risking his life for friends I won't be surprised if he saves her from the Uchiha massacre next ,I can handle the slow pace of the story and you making the jonins in this fanfic stronger compared with the original anime but please don't change the whole character of the mc his character was the only reason that made me and many readers continue reading this fanfic fujin character is rational, power seeking, cautious ,smart this is what makes fujin the mc we like don't ruin it with your own hands by making him stupid that gets influenced by friendship and love in the world of ninja were strength rules fujin has a long way to reach the level of madara (I'm taking about madara in your fanfic you need to make him even more OP than his version in the original just like what you did with the jonins and elite jonins, in your fanfic a group of elite jonins can defeat madara's anime version before the reanimation jutsu and ten tails from the anime).

great chapter

great chapter