Webnovel Author: DaoistNotAvilable - Novel Collection

Thank you for the great review. :)

Thank you so much. :)

Thanks for the very detailed and critical review. Helps me a lot. I will go back and check the chapters for the grammatical errors again. no....i don't have a name generator. trying to come up with them from my imagination, and it is really very hard work :))

Thanks for the very detailed and critical review. Helps me a lot. I will go back and check the chapters for the grammatical errors again. no....i don't have a name generator. trying to come up with them from my imagination, and it is really very hard work :))

You could try breaking down the paragraphs. Too many lines visually seem a lot for a reader. Also, there are a lot of different situations taking place in one chapter. Try separating the different segments with a line or something. For the reader it will become clearer, otherwise I was a bit confused when I read from one segment to another and suddenly couldn't connect. But really good start.

The FL is pretty feisty, works hard and does exactly what she decides. Loved the way she just kicked all party-goers out of the house. The three kids of the benefactors have very clear personalities, and the relation between the FL and each of them is well portrayed. Very good work.

The detailing of the world is very good. Also the different characters and the different professions which might exist in such a world. A very good piece of work.

I personally find the detailing a bit too heavy, but love the storyline. the characters are well defined, and sequences well spaced. would love to see more chapters. Good work.

The story is very hardcore and gripping right from the beginning. in a post apocalyptic world, how people survive and live on from day-to-day is very well written, also giving space to their emotions and frustrations. Very good work.

Beautiful detailing of the world and story backdrop. the story is fast paced, and a lot of things keep happening right from the start, keeping the readers on their toes. Hope to see more chapters soon.

Loved the chemistry between the FL and her system, it's hilarious. the FL is witty and decisive, making the story more and more interesting as it progresses. like your style of writing, very sharp and has a smooth rhythm. Very good work.

Thank you :))

Thank you so much. :)

Thank you so much for the great review. :)

Thanks for the great review. :)

Thank you so much. :)

Thanks for the in-depth review. :)

I found the way the story started off to be quite interesting and funny. Like the FL a lot - her expressions, her internal dilemmas.....very funny and relatable. Should go back and edit the chapters already uploaded. some minor mistakes in punctuations and word capitalizations. Keep up the good work. :)