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So far so good. I really like that it takes place during the time of Roger and his crew instead of Luffy's. The only thing I would criticize is that there is too much narration instead of having conversations.

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Don’t drop, don’t drop, don’t drop , don’t drop , don’t drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Pretty well. Grammar is good as well👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥🫥👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽