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I love LOVE this book! I saw it on light reader and read the book and every chapter, every word seemed like I was watching a movie. it is a perfect story with a mixture of mystery, action and love! up till now, I still can't forget their names! EDDIE AND STUART!!! well done author!

This is a story for action/adventure seekers.....like me. I love the chapter themes (titles) and I also love the writing style.

Genuine Author review here. your reviews are welcome. Tell me what you love and hate about my story. thanks!

The author has good writing skills, I personally didn't encounter any grammatical errors and that is good for a writer. secondly the story progresses successfully with given statistics and I personally liked it. but the writer can do a lot better by adding enough descriptions of the characters, rather than using dialogue to summarize it. well-done author.

I had to give the author's writing quality, 5 ratings. The author has a good writing style making it easy to read as the story progresses. The editing is fine, because I specifically didn't notice any grammatical errors (looks like he used grammarly). So what else do I have to say,....

😱 I am extremely happy with the author and this book! This is like...a film being watched. Every chapter has a good cliff hanger and I don't know why I just decided to spend time to read this book, but I am glad that I did. this is good. the book has good descriptions, thought not enough. I can't find any spelling errors or grammar mistakes this book was well edited. Infact I have something else to say......

I like the background history and how tye story is turning out. but the problem I have is that it a little hard to read the dialogue because they are written together instead of being separated. there are some punctuation errors too but nonetheless the story has good potential all that is needed is editing and the problems will be solved. well-done author.

I like the way the story is going but I think there is a problem with the use of quotes and capital letters in the story. which might make it hard to read. It needs improvement but I know that these type of mistakes would be corrected while editing before publishing. so it's not really a problem because it can be solved by correction. well-done author.

Done well, the author's description of character(s) were good. That is what a novel needs and another thing is that the author got skills. He/she is not new to writing and the the development in the story show it.

The writer has a good writing skill which needs to be developed. The book has a potential even though there are some...childish dialogues. Yet, the fact is that writing skills develop as you grow. so well done author 😊✌️

It is pretty hard to translate from Portuguese to English. so I commend the author for stretching himself to these length. this story is recommended for action lovers...but you are welcome to read!! The story's development is nice even though there are some minor mistakes. 😊