Badges 4
Moments 367
There's no rush. It's just hard to gauge how strong his clones are. It might even be better to keep it vague for now, hard statements of power can become a trap.
ch 120 00119. Sometimes your word isn't enough.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
It would be nice to know how far along the MC is in terms of ninja arts. Example, earlier Itachi and Kakashi said he was barely a first year academy student, which is fair. But how is his physical strength, speed, and endurance? Or Chakra.
ch 120 00119. Sometimes your word isn't enough.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
Agreed, people tend to confuse the two.
With Steve leading the way, they entered the exhibition, and Alex couldn't help but feel a sense of accomplishment. He had compromised his principles momentarily, but the outcome was undeniably positive.
Marvel: The Gene Collector
Movies · Midnight_Wonder
The worst variant is when the child is not even yours but you are told that it is. So you get the privilege of staying with a cheating partner, and raise someone else's children.
Until his 20th birthday, Marcus had lived his life as any young man. He was trying to get a good-paying job, with enough free time to enjoy his hobbies. Like a growing majority of young men, he was uninterested in marriage because of the worry of being cheated on, divorced, or being baby trapped.
The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Thanks for all the chapters, I enjoyed the pace. The physical development of the MC was odd, but it makes sense for him to relish his childhood and family. The use of clones too has been really interesting. I don't mind, but things seem to be going too well for him. I don't like forced conflict, so clever planning and superior power overcoming obstacles is fine, but please avoid a catastrophic event just for character development.
ch 116 00115. A issue from Hel.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
Every chapter feels like a cliffhanger because I'm so invested. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 51 Interesting Times - Chapter 51
Interesting Times
Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido
Would have been funny if he had.
As he was trying to speak again, another voice was heard from the other side of the room. "Are you trying to play a joke to lighten the mood, Fury? If everyone else here is like Sharon and I, we were explicitly asked to come here by you for a matter of the utmost importance. We were also told to make sure no one knew about it, not to be followed or tracked and not bring anything that has GPS."
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
I saw people complaining about the pace, but the only reason I'm upset is that there are so few chapters. Be as slow as you want with the story as long as I get 1000 chapters a day. You are taking the time to flesh out relationships, instead of killing off the parents immediately and making the MC an EMO loner whose only interaction is for the purpose of fluff.
The next few weeks flew past quickly and my routine didn't change much. My clone would be programming Monday thru Friday, while my parents were working. My parents made sure they had the weekends off so they could spend it with Emily and me. Which normally included May and Ben at least once for a meal, sometimes more. Peter would join us sometimes with his parents, but most of the time he would join us with May and Ben. His parents always seemed to be busy working, so he stayed with May and Ben half the time. It kinda sucks, but they treat him really well, so I don't think he is missing too much.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
The issue is rarely the sharing itself, but it depends on the nature of the verse. Some worlds don't take kindly to dimensional aliens. Or sharing stupidly, even if there is no controller force purging intrusions.
A major issue for some people is the MC was found out about being reincarnated and even explained their backstory to someone. Apparently that is taboo and for some people that completely destroys the story for them. So I just wanted to give a heads up before you read the story so you don't waste time on something you hate. Also more than the MC might be placed in this world/universe at some point. So just a heads up now, if it happens.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
Not only that, but the whole point of Asimov's books is that the laws don't even work in the story.
Several minutes later and a dissatisfied Ultron had all but exploded with frustration. Dan had laid out a version of Asimov's Laws of Robotics, a set of orders that left little room for murder and violence.
Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story
Anime & Comics · VendakSoth
Poor man, the cruel arc of lightning killed the cozy fire he had going on at home.
The electrical discharge was not very strong but it was more than enough to stop his hearth.
Harry Potter: Another Chance
Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
Very considerate way to give feedback, I'll try to learn from you.
"I don't know, maybe I learned by watching you, and my body somehow remembers it," Harry said.
Harry Potter: Another Chance
Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
Exciting development,
ch 39 39: The Hidden Rule
System Breaker of the Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · JSK_Wilson
Don't worry, we forgive you.
Do you ever just write double the normal chapter length because you forgot to split it up into two chapters? Because that's what I accidentally did with this chapter.
System Breaker of the Shinobi World
Anime & Comics · JSK_Wilson
Interesting deviation, kudos for taking the chance.
ch 34 Uchiha Massacre + 1
Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
Yeah, but there is no canon statement that Sharingan, EMS or otherwise increases physical abilities beyond ability to perceive and learn. Sasuke got slapped by Lee because of that. No boost to speed, strength, endurance, regeneration, etc.
But I will mold him into what I want. There were many things that were wrong with his canon version. He was stupid in everything outside of Shinobi related things. He was hotheaded and relied on Kurama for everything. He didn't even achieve his full potential. He should have the strongest body in the verse except the Otsutsukis. There is literally no reason that Sasuke should even come close to his base stats except genjutsu, reaction and perception, let alone KCM2.
Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
Hinata would never lie, so far she has been a paragon of virtue.
ch 61 Beggars can’t be Choosers.
Naruto : Hinata Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Devils_hand
Thanks for the chapter. You release a chapter almost every day, how long does it take you? Do you have the whole story planned out already?
ch 125 00124. Dinner and a movie?
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo