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man. .you guys going nuts or what . totally ruined the review ..

only if our world was same!

this book is sub par at best...lots of loopholes ... no proper description like. spoiler alert: waht the hell is daisy seed..how did she get it...or how the hell did level his cultivation 2 times and the girl only 1...or this book forced me to become a guesser I mean author just says it could just be guest in the novel which I dont understand at all I mean in the salamander quest ...when he met up with the white wolf and girl they were in tatterd cloths but they were fine and the white wolf became stronger so he could guess what happened ....but I cant common now describe what they did and how the white would became stronger....else I cant guess it all...because of lack of information my brain cell are dying ....

how about illicit relationship?!

nice debate

There were some spelling mistakes, wrong grammar and many skips in story line, ohh and also I think you should focus more in MC's harem and cooking. Anyway nice fanfic enjoyed it.