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Commented you could replace hanged with hung
After the AST lesson ended, the four of us hanged out for a small time and went our separate ways.
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Commented I really like the story concept of this! There is a few things that I didn't really like about the writing, it's nothing big, there's just some words that can be taken out of a sentence, but other than that I like the story and I like the writing so far! Keep it up man.
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There might be a typo here, I think you might've wanted to type 'and' instead of 'a' but I'm not sure.
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