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Up to now, it's really good. Well, the only lacking in my opinion is the MC grow too fast, perhaps because too much time skip. Oh also character design/personality is kinda lacking but not bad. Anyway, thanks for the hardwork author ✌️

whats the original name?

Awesome novel. The story is goin good, the plot is quite fresh though the idea actually pretty common with some regression and dungeons. I can only say good work and please don't drop this sir author, thank you for your hard work!

Why delete my previous review, its my honest review. What you author need is to improve from review not delete review below 4*. Next time you delete it I'll review 1* and its review war. I'll keep make new 1* review every time you delete mine😉 (I'm kinda people who keep grudge after all XD)

I haven't read all yet, up till now it's pretty good and fine. But I think author isn't very good at adding emotion or expression into words, for example, the narration says that someone was shocked, but its just that, the follow up sentence doesn't feel like the character is shocked. And its really bad, I feel like reading bunch of words w/o emotion (seriously this is either bcos author really bad at it or I'm just reading to much book and journal for my thesis🥲)

I know it's hard to write and improve but keep up sir author 👍PS: I might delete this and change my review after reading more if I have time.

Chapter 50, for pharmacist dou. And my bad, what I mean mixed up is the pronouns, like he she, though there's very few