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Wolves were pack animals. They instinctually sought out each other's physical presence for comfort. That is all that Violet was doing. Anyone in the pack who could sense the trauma that she had been through would stay and allow here this innocent comfort as she slept. And it seemed as though she badly needed the rest.

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My Lycan Mate of Suicide Forest

Fantasy · emme_z

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In this instance you can leave out the “bashes the whip” …. as the whip landed on her back

Leia knelt on the floor with two of her father's men tightly holding onto her arms. Diminutive drops of blood fell from her wounded body to the floor, and her bloody teeth tightly clenched together. Fragile drops of tears, which she couldn't hold back anymore, fell from her eyes onto her bloody clothing. She balled her hands, and lines of veins popped up on her neck as bashes of whip landed on her back. That was becoming unbearable! It hurts and pains her to the bones!

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Fantasy · AngelLily

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Slash with a whip not bash. Bash has different implications (bash a head on the ground) … seems more blunt instrument vs slash

Mr. Adolpho glanced around and chuckled lightly, clearly annoyed. He stood up and let out an enraged breath. His eyes, which were staring at her, burned with rage and his grip on the whip tightened. His steady breathing became shaky and he furiously bashed the whip on her body, each stronger than the other. He walked over to her and grabbed her by the throat, forcing her to look him in the face. "Just because you're my daughter doesn't mean I can't kill you right here and right now if I want to!" He tightened his grip on her throat, making it a little harder for Leia to breathe. "So you better be careful with your words!"

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Fantasy · AngelLily

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