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Opps might be a bit long you don’t have to read it all my bad :p

I really like your first book it was amazing not perfect but very good. I really enjoyed the story on multiple levels, first off I really enjoyed having the main cast be at odds with the Mc off the bat as literally every other one peice fic has the main Mc be chums with the straw hats. This was a fresh new take and very nice to see. Second it was not a carbon copy of the original story it was uni que it told its own story with own lessons and meanings. for example we only interacted with the main cast a few times we did not see wano or dress, and 90% luffy was not even born. Ok I’m ranting a lot so ima keep it short. Thirdly I adore how it’s not just horny bait like really Olivia is such a awesome take the story was not at all controled by lust like you did not even touch boa nami and robin like in every other fic I can barely read there parts they just feel like lifeless s*x fantasy’s but the real characters and just havin them be that is honestly heartbreaking most of th e time and harem itself is dumb like can you imagine multiple girls likening one guy when it’s not for money or power HAHAHAHHAH yeah right! Also the dark theme is good to one peice is a hor rible world the strawhats and a few rare other rare cases are like the onl good pepole in that whole world if there’s one place I’d never want to be reborn into it’s this one it’ just a world full of misery. So uh not so fast huh anyways just wanted to say thank you from the bottom of my heart writer for making my life just a little bit brighter I woke up every day looking forward to the next chapter you made me rethink some things in my life so once again thank you a bunch- from some random reader

Really good book I’ve never seen a vivi book before and honestly it’s incredible. Reading this book made my day thanks a bunch author!