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Also, I never said it's impossible for someone to believe in magic, you stupid fxxk. The point was it has never been reasonable to say magic is the cause of anything in all of human history. The answer to why do plants grow was not magic, the answer to what is the sun, was not magic, the thunder wands wielded by European settlers against the native Americans were not magic. "bUt I dOn't kNow HoW tHunDEr waNd woRK So IS maGIc!" was not a reasonable answer. At MOST the answer would be, "I don't know how he did that, but I'm going to stay away just in case he can do it again."

Cool, agnostic doesn't mean anything unless you follow it with what you are agnostic about. If you said, "I'm very," and I was like, "very what?" your response was, "I don't need to justify myself to you, you're slow! I'm just very! dur hur dur." Saying, "I just saw something happen that I believe is impossible, therefore magic," Is never the reasonable answer. Even if it was, in fact, magic. Why not the more likely answer, "was I tricked? Stage Magicians and even some street performers can do this sort of thing", or "did I just hallucinate it?", or...... literally any other non magic answer because no magic has ever been demonstrated. Demonstrably incorrect in saying it was reasonable because I can give many more non magic answers that are more likely until investigated and exhausted.

Big words? Factually and demonstrably are big words to you? moron. Agnostic what? Agnostic theist? Agnostic atheist? Yeah, more than half the world believes in magic. More than half the world was indoctrinated into believing in magic. In most places throughout history, you'd literally be killed for not believing in magic. "iM AgnOstIC," you don't even know what agnostic means, which tells me you probably believe that dragons and unicorns used to exist but the aliens hid them.

Yeah, the author is incapable of accepting that he is factually and demonstrably incorrect. In a world like ours, only the most stupid people would ever accept "it's magic" as an answer. Period. He's probably religious lol.

It would be a good story if anything happened in it's massively bloated chapters. No joke, the author draws out single actions like he's trying to write Shakespearian poetry. He stomped his right foot down, the crowd going silent, the breeze gently fluttering his golden hair as he studied his opponents face and stance, a single drop of dew falling from a blade of grass in another country sealing his opponents fate as he made his first decision of the match, hoping to come out on top as he had always done. He moved his left foot forward. Like that, but entire 5k word chapters.

nothing here! not a story! Just an ad for a story that might not exist..........................................................................

not a story at all. just some troll. not sure why though............................................................................................?

interesting premise is all this story has going for it. Very poorly written, very short "chapters", and every other chapter is just a shill for the authors pat re on. 1 out of 5 stars, would not recommend. In another authors hands it could have been cool.

this is just an ad for a story that might not even exist. Author is only releasing it on patreon and stuff. don't bother as that is blah blah need

Just a warning. Eventually the adult mc blackmail's 11 year old Pansy and sexually assaults and r###s her regularly. Weird direction to go. It started well, interesting mc, quickly goes down hill.