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I remember leaving a review saying i hate Elisa bc she drags out the story and ruins the mc, Im back to say that Elisa is amazing but still for some reason whenever she was introduced and they finally got out of the dungeon everything feels so pointless? Mark will spend dozens of chapters thinking abt somethimg and get really close to and answer amd them BOOM elisa comes right when he almost has am amswer and he completely forgets everything. Love the story and love Elisa but author please dont drag out something for so many chapters with dumb interuptions, its so cliche. The mc will continue to almost be at the brink of something and it gets me on the edge of my seat (Its been ten chapters of just him brainstorming) them for whatever reason the mc will be like "thinking is too much for me right now" making the previous ten chapters pointless. All i want is progression. There is no need for an arc to consist of a drawn out fight where the same thing is continually repeated and a pointless brainstorm over and over again. it takes a solid 50 chapters for any progress to be seen. but i do.... love the tiny interactions between the three krista mark elisa, its just nice... but 20 chapters straight of these interactions can be a bit.... draining. Anyway love the story it truly is just enchanting. The story development is the ONLY bad thing abt this beautiful journey!!!!

You have no idea how patient i am... 25+ chapters at this point (in the arc im on) Why has the mc and the forest spirit talked for 10 chapters straight??! There was no progression in the conversation either because the mc was high off the mist... then when they finally fight whenever he did damage she would try to trick him and take over his mind. EVERY FUCKING TIME! this also went on for 10 more chapters I am on chapter 233. I can say with my heart this is the worst development ever. And i do not hate Elisa but she also holds back the story so much. The first volume ended at about 178 or something and since then whenever the mc would fight she would say something like "Why do you fight? :(" and this would be enough to make him question EVERYTHING and so he wouldnt fight until the forest spirit Yarnah. The story at the beginning was pretty redundant, with the only noticable bits being when the mc had something akin to a flashback or the manifestation of his subconscious when he would evolve. But these bits were why I read the story, it was interesting and unique. So much so that i was able to ignore how predictable the story was becoming. But omg, This arc? 50+ chaps and what progression has been made?! Its all because of Elisa and Krista that the mc has become even more boring than he already was. Mc cant even devour like the monster he is because of these two always "bringing the humsn back in him". I guess volume 2 is supposed to be some sort of "finding who you are" kinda moment for MARK and im all for it, but when no progression in his identity search has been made it pisses me off. Another example for why i hate this ark, Yarnah will ask mark a question like "Are you mad" then he will ignore her and she will ask 5 more times until he kind of answers. There will be entire chapters of this kind of interaction, you see the problem? no progress is made WHATSOEVER!! I liked it SOOO much when the story was simple with fights and i loved it when the mc started finding more out about his past since it added more to the story. and someone please give a valid reason why the mc hasnt used Berserker?! for the entire volume?? He struggles in fights bc the author makes every fight of his the same (Start fight, Struggle, Struggle some more, sudden idea, Prevail or draw) the fight would just be so much easier if he went berserk, its his STRONGEST COMBAT SKILL. I dont wanna hear no one say some stupid shit like he was holding back bc when elisa and krista were seeing nightmares the mc got infuriated and couldnt break out if his restraints so why hold back? Anyway author, you're losing me at this point man. ill give it 5 more chapters please do better. and if yall want a better story that has NEVER dissapointed me with just overall nice development and a truly monstrous mc read Becoming a monster. Way better than this dog shit