Webnovel Author: Fausto_Neto_4680 - Fanfic Collection

I also liked the story. But these very absurd moments really leave a bad taste in the mouth. Of those you mentioned, what bothers me a little is the MacBook thing, and now this Leonard training thing. Not only OG Leonard, but any normal person were forced to do this, with a 99% chance they would report the MC to the authorities because he was completely crazy. If this happened at the end of their training arc, it would be more acceptable.

I don't think he can save Tsunade without a lot of help from the Autor…

He called cultivators bum killers, but he is exactly the same as a cultivator. A killer who only cares about growing his power, and kills anyone for no reason.

Yeah, like for Mangekyou awakening…

Like Oda making Enel like Eminem.

The chapter is a bit boring. I haven't posted my fanfictions, but I've already tested formatting my stories with chap gpt. And a big problem is that if you're not careful with what you ask for, it ends up leaving things very melodic, poetic and dramatic. It looks very unnatural for a fanfiction.

Its 2009? He can be Spider man of ASM

Breaking the limiter is something that exists in practically any shonen anime, with a magic system that allows you to grow. What Saitama did was not break the limiter, but remove it.

Luffy will probably still have one more gear. Like a 2.0 version of the G5.

This is an AU I know, but the spirits that live in Bankai are nothing more than a part of the soul of the shinigami. That's why when it breaks it can't recover. So Ichigo's Hollow is nothing more than a part of him, a part that he didn't like and repressed and that's why the Hollow like to controll him.

I can easily see Norman making billions with them research.

500k annually is not much, I think you have no idea how much the pharmaceutical industry is a source of money. And they didn't sign a contract? in fact they are not even old enough to sign a contract. Norman wouldn't be stupid enough to throw them away, but he could do several things to control them.

This is sick, they should be little kids like 5 years. But you are treating this thing about love and romantic relationships too early, and it’s weird.

You can make Kuma search mc, the problem is Saturn put eyes on mc. And this work is much better than the past.

Artemis is the best girl in Young Justice

Infinity has obvious weaknesses such as powers that do not need to travel through space, light that passes through infinity, gases that also pass through since it needs to breathe, etc…. It's not as invincible as it seems, I'm sure Batman and other superminds could think of something.

It's weird, one moment he's apathetic without caring about anyone's physical or emotional state. In the other, he is a punisher who tries to find a "noble" reason to kill everyone, and is even full of emotions. And that wouldn't be problem, cause can develop the character. The problem is if after that he goes back to being the lone wolf without emotions.

First he brought it on by treating others rudely. Secondly, their reaction was very edge, especially considering that the MC will be a "treasure" for the league with the pokemons he has.

No, far from him having the same retaliation as his ex. But at least don't be so passive, and teach her good manners.