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ch 13 Rebirth
Fantasy · Naysay3r
Thanks for the chapter
ch 28 Royal Bastard
Games · Hamapo
Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!
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Thanks for the chapter!
ch 13 Rebirth
Vengeful Ascension: The Rise of a Demon Emperor
Fantasy · Naysay3r