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really good story overall love the way he uses his powers and the way the system is built around dmg instead of xp

the book takes a lot of usual op mc cliches but somehow finds ways still make the stakes high and keeps you on the edge of your seat or bed if your lying down lol truly a must read

writitng quality is very good and the story overall is ok although i think the characters need a little more development >>..........................................................

after the reading the first chapter the writing quality was good the characters where more or less ok as well although i do have one complain but it miht just be a nitpick is the troupe of the spoiled step sibling bullying the main character :/