Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

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Ruh-Roh Shaggy, this no good.

With his watchful eyes, the half-wolf could see out of the corner of his eye that a girl with white hair and pointed ears was watching him from one of the panes of glass near the main door. For some reason, just a glance at her was enough for luke's heart to start fluttering.

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

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He also discovered that she did not use a bra or underpants.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

Commented

This chapter isn't finished because I didn't have enough time to complete it today. However, when it is complete tomorrow, it will have a word count of about four thousand. Thanks.

ch 0 1 Chapter One, The Library

Temporal war.

Fantasy · Hayden_Bleakley_8354

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

Commented

'"WAAAAH" Baby sounds*' Lol. Thanks for the chapter.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2 - Budget Birth.

Tantric Magic: Reborn in a hentai world

Fantasy · meepins

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

Commented

Past or present tense. Pick one.

She was one of my go too's when I want to empty my balls and leave quickly. I still had a lot of office work that needs to be done by tomorrow. I brought it over for a quick read over and some editing.

Tantric Magic: Reborn in a hentai world

Fantasy · meepins

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

Commented

'jerk* jerk* jerk* splurt*' Quite possibly the best sentence I've ever read

jerk* jerk* jerk* Splurt* I lean over my monitor and start wiping the mess I started. my monitor flickers with the image of Sandra Bovine. a big tittied goth girl.

Tantric Magic: Reborn in a hentai world

Fantasy · meepins

Hayden_Bleakley_8354

1yr

Posted

Hello, readers. The quality of this is likely to be poor because this is, essentially, a draft. Apologies for that. Also, as the author of this novel, I am obligated to give it a five-star review.

Temporal war.

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