My dude I love the different perspectives of other characters as it gives more flavor to the story but there's a time and place to put it in especially when the story is in the very climax of an arc or something. It takes the reader out of the experience. Everyone was waiting for the ball to drop and when it finally did, you decide to blue ball the audience by not giving the aftereffects of Aqua getting stabbed and instead give an equivalent to a flashback. The Miyako and Hikaru interludes were nice but just add them AFTER everyone's reaction to Aqua getting stabbed. Honestly this just reminds me of the Naruto Shippuden anime where things are finally getting good, they decide to drop filler episodes (flashbacks) in the middle of the climax.
But I think when Miyako's chapter is around and I see a comment about filler chapters and too many side characters chapter. Of course, there are comments that this is good, world building and stuff. But I know I messed up… since at that point, I already wrote several chapters ahead and I feel like this will come to be honest.
Anime & Comics · RazackCh
This be the most unrealistic thing in this story so far only because the teachers here are using common sense. If this happened in the real world, teachers would suspend the bullied person straight away because of 'eScALatING'.
The rumors of how Yuji had beaten up the three bullies from class 2-4 spread like water around the school, but the teenager decided not to do anything about it. To him, this was more positive than negative, because at worst, it would attract other bullies to try to test him, but at best, it would simply keep any delinquents from messing with him.
Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
MC:
"I know, I even startle myself at my own genius sometimes."
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
C'mon Lexy you're better than this. Didn't you say it's not worth it to research on him anymore? You're just putting urself on a sunk cost fallacy.
I continued my research on Black Bolt, trying to find out what made him tick. It simply irritated me to no conceivable end that his DNA was nigh impossible to read or break, one impossibly more complex than Kryptonian DNA, a fact that made no scientific sense.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
Good to see you back
ch 31 Kishirika
Anime & Comics · Roxy_Greyrat21
Hope you update soon since I can't wait for the next chapter.
ch 180 Chapter 170
Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
Typical Constantine. Making the situation worse just by being there.
"Well, love. She's standing right by his side," replied Constantine, his eyes on Rachel. "Don't try to hide it, kid. I can literally feel the evil oozing out of you."
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
This line just seems unnecessary. The dragon was more or less respectful to the MC for the entirety of the fight so at least give respect to it. This line just makes it feel out of place and makes the MC feel like a Xianxia character
"Sorry, what were you saying?" Kenji once again missed what was his enemy's last words.
Anime & Comics · SlimeSage
so it begins
I love him I love him I love him I love him I love him I love him I love him I love him I love him
That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol
Anime & Comics · RazackCh