Author your story has a good potential , i don't know how much you will continue your journey but i hope you will conclude it happily . Novel writing quality is good , yeah starting chapters may take a toll but still it readable and understandable , story potential is good taken by reference but it's still good/ excellent but don't make it plot Armour just don't make it .... make it look like he is hardworking or else it will not be much enjoyable this much only i will tell . thanks for writing the novel hope your journey gets conclude.
Fantasy · Pandirom
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Author your story has a good potential , i don't know how much you will continue your journey but i hope you will conclude it happily . Novel writing quality is good , yeah starting chapters may take a toll but still it readable and understandable , story potential is good taken by reference but it's still good/ excellent but don't make it plot Armour just don't make it .... make it look like he is hardworking or else it will not be much enjoyable this much only i will tell . thanks for writing the novel hope your journey gets conclude.
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Fantasy · Pandirom