I already like Vladimir, the fact that he's in a submarine is even crazier. Just know, i've been here since day 1. He casually destroys a ship on the first chapter, loll
I really love they way you write your scenes, it's obvious you have a ton of experience, i didn't even expect the 'bond' thing when i started reading, but as someone who writes for fun just occassionally, i feel like you really deserve the 5!
thank you!!
The chapters are really interesting, especially the first, i even laughed quite a bit, i really love where it's going too, the characters feel very real and also relatable!!
I know it might seem weird that the writer rates his book 5 stars but I feel like I really outdid myself on this one, I'll leave this for you guys to judge
What do you guys think?
Though the book just started I feel like it has a lot of potential !!
What do you guys think about it?
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Sol awakens alone in the ruins of an abandoned facility with no memories beyond his own name. Haunted by splitting headaches whenever he reaches for his past, he finds himself in a world where every soul possesses an ability, mysterious Cores shape reality, and the strongest walk paths known as Performances. Taken in by the director of Oprah Academy, Sol begins searching for answers while hiding the truth behind his strange purple eyes, his impossible affinities, and a power that lets him perceive the world in ways no one else can. But fragments of his memories refuse to stay buried. A terrorist organization calls him the perfect specimen. And somewhere beyond humanity's reach, something known only as Instability is beginning to stir once again. Some songs are sung to inspire. Others... ...are sung to mourn the end of the world.15 Chs 9 Collections
I was a bit confused with the wording at first, but the way you expressed how Cael had relived the experience multiple times really makes me enjoy the book
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