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In later chapters quality has improved.

Fantasy · SonGoku0_0

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Definitely needs an editor. But it is good novel. There are knights so I like it hehehe If you correct your grammar this novel will have potential.

Fantasy · SonGoku0_0

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How could he not notice that he had hole in his hand?

ch 0 7 Under the door

Fantasy · SonGoku0_0

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Love the story with any knights so it good for me :D Dfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfddfdfdfdfdffddfdfdfdfdfdhjhcd hdsdgd 140 charactersssss

Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow