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Kek

On skibidi?

If it makes you feel weirded then why read it?

UBW?

Keep the pace

Second

Is this OFA a better version of the og one or is it the same one?

Take care of yourself first

No problem, if you're serious about improving the story's grammar then you should try using something like a writing AI grammarly or chat gpt

No problem

The premise is great if you could improve the grammar/writing style and the way the character speak(that is a bit connected to the grammar) than this would be a 4/5 story for me but because of the grammar it goes down to 2/3 stars, the way you could improve this is by using grammarly chat gpt or other AIs to help you correct your mistakes or have someone read and correct them(like other authors do)

Improve the grammar than it will get good

Improve the grammar use chat gpt grammarly or other writing AIs

Bro make the chapters longer

Go read a book then my guy why you complaining on a fnafiction of an anime that's just stupid

Improve the grammar and this will be better use grammarly or chat gpt

I'm loving this

RIP

First.