Its not even bas as far as writing goes. Also I think it will just get better because the story's premise is pretty good. I like some of the characters, Nerissa has some depth. Hopefully this is not just some mindless harem or cultivation Novel.
Sci-fi · ColiJiyo
This is somewhat of a comfortable read. The worldbuilding is pretty good. Pacing might be a little slow, as apparent till Chapter 6, we are still trying to get the MC established. But progress is made and I wouldn't say it's bad but maybe I'm too used to the other brain dead novels. This is quite a refreshing read. Almost like traditional novels. Well done author. Looking forward for your future releases.
Eastern · ColiJiyo
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Its not even bas as far as writing goes. Also I think it will just get better because the story's premise is pretty good. I like some of the characters, Nerissa has some depth. Hopefully this is not just some mindless harem or cultivation Novel.
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Sci-fi · ColiJiyo