Webnovel Author: Vaporites - Fanfic Collection

good critique. something giving author slap in the face is better than giving useless praise that will not help author improve his writing

okay.... youre to heavy to write with AI. for somone that read many book looking at your writing made me sick. use AI for your inspiration or to solving writer block because human brain is better than low end artificial inteligent learning machine. i apreciate your determination but your writing suck

(movie is real) if i am not wrong. its only good manga with this genre

okay its realy good. if you havent read manhwa the movie is real then read it. it have same vibe but this novel fix the problem on manhwa. its good potensial, and i hope author can continue writing unlike movie is real author that on sick leave in covid era that we didnt know he is dead or alive.

okay..... this stock things is b*llsh*t. if you dont know how stock market work its better didnt add it. honestly i apreciated you who want to write but even with system you cant cheat on stock market because MC will made many enemy because stock is zero sum game. mean if you buy stock that will be rising several percent in the future they will know someone buy it because the price is rising and they will sell the stock they have..... its stupid decision man

yeah. honestly now people use AI more for writing not for removing writer block, that honestly grave mistake because everyone do it. unless there AI tools that reliable on the market but reality there none

AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?

Good novel. bro did you edit original novel? from what i know chinese novel is a bit mess

Bro can you write something that use logic?

its best naruto fanfiction on this website. its started with depresed arc but now mc is on better condition and this novel worth 5 stars