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Interesting world background. The descriptions are so vivid that I could picture every detail perfectly. Looking forward to more chapters. This goes in my collection. [img=recommend]

Here is a shameless review...I have dropped four stars in the writing quality section because I know my grammar is not perfect...I am trying to improve.. so please be paitent with me, readers.. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the elaborate review..I work on the points that you have mentioned. :)

Interesting World Background.. The realtionship between brother and sister is cute..looking forward to their character development...keep going [img=recommend]

Thanks for the review...I'll work on cutting short my sentences.

Thanks!

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the review :)

Five stars because I just loved how the characters were established in the opening of the story. I am already expecting a lot of interesting banter between the two leads...looking forward to more chapters..keep going.

It is very engaging. I loved the opening of the story and how it took a complete 180 degree shift. I can already feel there is going to be a great character development..looking forward to more chapters.

It is a lovely read.. I liked the opening of the novel very much..one is drawn to the character very organically. Looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters.

I am hooked! I liked all the characters, but Monica is already my favourite. Also, it felt like reading a fantasy take on Dicken's novel. Do you have any of his child protagonists in your mind while writing this?