I was reading another naruto fanfic that just posted a new chapter, and the chapter came with the reveal that pakura was actually alive 馃槀馃槀馃槀 what are the chances of that
ch 32 Chapter 32 Struggle
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ch 140 Chapter 139
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Glad we got a POV of the MC
ch 81 Interlude 1
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Starlord punchin air rn
ch 400 Chapter 400 "A Big Client"
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Bro rockin the 1000 letter chapters
ch 74 Chapter 74 Coincidence?
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But they can literally check his lineage, his whole family is shinobi i think 馃拃馃拃
ch 64 Chapter 64 Conclusion
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Your story doesnt seem that planned. You make him obtain a trifecta falna, which is supposed to be 3 immortals, but you throw a goddess in there for no reason. Then you have the other 2 immortals be a swordsman and a knight, but make the MC someone who doesnt like swords? This of course isnt mentioning the fact the MC completely lacks his own thoughts and personality, but that part is okay i guess, since he was technically just born.
ch 0 6 C6: First Time at the Dungeon
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You couldve made it an adventurer from the past that got qualification to become a servant. If you wanted to establish a connection, just make him join a normal familia. Its lazy as hell to bring up trifecta falna just to make a goddess join it
ch 0 4 C4: Third member
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Should change the synopsis, i didnt read at first because i thought he was told to acquire the falna as some sort of way to pay back the god who helped him, but in this chapter it is said he needs it to live.
ch 0 1 C1: Tortured Soul
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I was already thinking it was sad, and killing his infant sister was just too much, seeming like it was only there to force everything in a darker direction. Ig it worked, but it felt way too deliberate. Also it was just way too much imo
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Cold sweat
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Killing an infant was too much.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Cold sweat
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What happened to the consistent posting 馃様
ch 144 Ch.143 Yukino Final
Omniverse: The Orderless Worlds
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