I would probably go with soft and fluffy or hard and chewy pancakes, but I don't really decide that much since I'll eat 'em up anyways. What I really do like to make my pancakes taste better for me is adding more flavor to it. The plain ones are fine and all, but adding coffee, or chocolate, or anything to the batter is what I want my pancakes to be, if there's no syrup or something.
"Drakie wants pancakes!" Drakie demanded. "Pancakes! Pancakes! Pancakes!"
Action · Alphachoas
hmmm Yes, the side-effects seems like a fetish dream... excluding the death part.
"Well, nephew I was getting to all that." Lana replied. "They are lacking a few of the safety systems that Nantex has patented. We are working on our own safety measures, of course, but such things take time. So, they can overload and kill the host, cause uncontrolled muscle growth, cause hair loss, hair growth, weight gain, weight loss, and a variety of other different side effects up to and including death."
Action · Alphachoas
Nope. Definitely not the end since the story is just getting started... I hope.
ch 33 The end?
Fantasy · Nwose
Oh, I won't drop it. But I don't read it all the time because of other stories/books/novels. And anyway, I'm still a little bit early on the story so there is about 16.69% I would drop, and 42.01% I would keep reading w'/out hindrance on the later chapters... Hehe
ch 21 As expected
Fantasy · Diyen_Pi
Although the writing needs work here and there, I imagine those mistakes as a comedic sense of humor rather than complaining about it. I still complain, but only inwardly. And I enjoyed the story so far and I hope that the MC becomes a true monster but only temporarily, and that the story goes more serious than before. Anyway, Good Luck!
ch 21 As expected
Fantasy · Diyen_Pi
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Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
Every time Fenrir calls Ezra "boy" it reminds me of that "God of War" meme.
"Yes and I devoured the curse within you. It's up to you now, don't disappoint me, boy."
Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
I might've missed this or hadn't read it yet but... what's his hair color?
ch 26 4 Years Later
Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
Instead of painkillers, it's "KILLER PAIN"
Fenrir intervened his pondering and said "The pill has an only function of repairing skin injuries, it won't affect muscle pain. These exercises will gather scary power in your body, the more you train your muscles and flexibility the more explosive the power will be."
Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
Do you have any reference? Pls.
The jötunn was 2.8 meters tall, its back legs were short and arms were long enough to stand on four limbs. Its colour was purple, the head was long like a horse having sharp long canines. The head was decorated with large antlers akin to that of an elk.
Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
It's ok, take your time (not too much) I have many unread or still ongoing stories or chapters from other books anyways. We have things to do IRL, so the readers should respect the time the author takes to write and release a chapter, and the readers should also take some time off from reading and do other things (if they have).
ch 31 Move or we are goanna die.
Fantasy · Nwose
A CHAPTER!, WOOHOO! (sorry, I'm just in a good mood reading)
ch 31 Move or we are goanna die.
Fantasy · Nwose
This is true. The first book that I fell in love with also had something just like this, it's about how everything is not light or dark, and instead of 'gray' it's 'color'
"Jason, this world and its people aren't just good or evil. It sounds simple and good on paper do divide people into these categories based on their actions but you will never find people who are completely good or evil.
Fantasy · BlackFlamer
Enlighten me, what does 'Lmhto' means?
"Just stay dead."
Fantasy · BlackFlamer
I'm gonna use this as one of my characters' phrases.
Deal Or Death
Fantasy · BlackFlamer
I will agree with you on this one.
'I wonder how he will look with two fox ears on his head.' Ray chuckled before going up the stairs.
Fantasy · BlackFlamer
The plot somehow is missing something and I don't know what. The writing needs editing and improvements, especially the character's lines need punctuation and separation from the others. (sorry, it's just honest criticism but I like your story so far, and since I'm also practicing writing a novel, let's just all try to improve. Ps: I still haven't seen the later chapters on how it's improving.) GOOD LUCK!
ch 0 8 SURVIVE
Fantasy · Nwose
I knew that something knew would knew this knew that... It's too many KNEW!
Some he knew and some. He knew that he knew but he could be remember where he knew them from. But David didn't try to remember where he knew them from. He didn't want to and he didn't care to either.
Sci-fi · Typhlix
Sen-Ray... his father is right! it is sunshine
The Great Dragon Sen was bestowed upon the name "Ray". It was all because his father said that the name reminded him of the sunshine. But the Great Dragon Sen hated it. The name was just far too ordinary and average. He felt weak every time he heard his own name.
My Dragon System
Fantasy · JKSManga