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the story starts like a typical chinese style writing and I was "oh, maybe another trash novel sigh... BUT as I kept reading I could not stop myself this,......this .....this novel is not a chinese style writing anymore this is much better than a whole lot of other english based naruto fanfic. WHY? because of the GENIUS plot ! Character development ! Did i not mentioned that the MC is very relatable like magic, every struggle the MC goes through as if I am in a VR experiencing it firsthand. I really felt like this fanfic has touched my very soul. ....................................Another GOOD naruto fanfic would be "child of chakra" which is also good to read. But compared this fanfic , I had only admiration for the author/translator for doing an amazing job. I am very excited for more chapters as I have read up to chapter 137 in this fanfic and it is a brilliantly made fanfic! i think this is the only fanfic on webnovel that I rated as 5 STAR on all category. - this fanfic is good because it probably wont have a harem nor a forced harem. I do not hate any harem tag. I just hate unjustifiable harem without any reasoning nor logic behind to support the story. A fanfic that has harem is very hard to also be a good fanfic most fanfic are forced harem of which i dislike( changing the behavior/essence of character unlike their original counterpart to be out of character is the definition of forced harem). -I also don't like to read a psychopath MC that is anti hero. Luckily this fanfic is not anti hero. example "naruto behind the scenes & Aokiji in naruto" are examples of a badly plan/written anti-hero. The best anti hero fanfic MUST take reference to "Lelouch the rebbelion" story where the MC is a villain but you cant help yourself to support and love the MC and every bad thing he does is forgiven.^^

didnt you write that the world that the MC found himself is pixelated and animated? so meaning this is not an isekai. didnt you mention that the mc is actually knows that he is not dead yet? AND also that the MC came to conclusion that he is in a lucid dream. did you forgot what you wrote?

PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM.

why tag it as isekai when clearly it is not. Since the author himself said so that the MC is not reincarnated nor was he tranmigrated. this story is about the dream of a living comatose patient. And this signify what kind of ending the story will have meaning no matter how many chapters you read in the end reality will smash your face.The MC just have to wake up and end the silly dream and be disfigured for life. it is not an isekai, because the world where he believe himself to be in is pixelized and animated unlike a real world.

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

story was very childish at first but later on very genius and amazing but unfortunately since this fanfic has been drop so i will give low rating. why is this fanfic dropped? because theres only 100 chapters currently but on other sites this fanfic has already reached 164 chapters and was confirmed dropped by many sites.

quite a good story but i just have to give low score because no updates for 2years. if there is any update on chapter i might change this review

the main tag for this fanfic is anti-hero as the MC is a psychopath. he will kills of anyone who is not from his village. For those of you who would like this setting you would love it. here you can see all your favorite protagonist die. for me the only thing interesting about this fanfic is to see how Mist village vs (konoha&all other village& kaguya&other otsutsukis) of which i dont want to read the process i am only interested to read the end result. because this is a anti-hero setting of which i am not a fan. Writing Quality>>>>>>3 stars for early chapters but the writing quality gets better with chapters........................ Stability of Updates>>>>>4 star ........................................... Story Development>>>>>3 lots interesting development but anti-hero .................. Character Design>>>> 3 star World Background>>>>4 star The total score 3.2

Great story buildup and the only reason I gave 4 stars is because I used microsoft edge browser 'read aloud' and whenever it comes to the name of the MC I keep hearing "BAKayaro" instead of "bakorio". It is really painful to keep hearing the MC being called stupid every time his name is readaloud. Also, I noticed from some chapters the MC is sometimes called Yuki. in chapters 256,225,226,205,204 just to name a few. CONCLUSION: this great story probably with an awesome character name as Yuki but later author changed it to BAKArio. unless you read it manually its ok, but using readaloud Bakorio as a character name is just sounds horrible which will destroy my experience. you probably dont get what i am trying to say so let me illustrate from readaloud at max speed voice selection microsoft david. example: "baka-yaro is the best" (is it insulting/sarcasm/praise) "what does brother Baka-yaro think?" what is your name? " I am called uchiha baka-yaro" ............................. sigh, because it is a great story i really dont want to bring down the rating thats why i forced myself to give the 4 stars but in terms of reading experience (using microsoft edge readaloud voice selection microsoft david) at max speed , I pity the MC to be called stupid in every chapter i know bakorio doesnt stands for stupid maybe this is all KILLER B's fault because he always says bakayaro in the anime and just coincidently our MC has a name that sound very similar to killer B's rap.sigh