Your story is very good. Don't listen to these people and their unfounded criticism. It was immediately clear that John would try to improve relations with Dorn, but not with the Martels (almost). And I also agree about the fact that John is still an Outsider, but I feel that he will soon correct this. And I’m looking forward to Nira’s future plot and she is more developed in character, etc. I never doubted you and your writing, never.
ch 84 Chapter 84 - Artican Trade in Westeros 11 (Dorne 09).
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
In the end, only Tsunade remained. heh
"I might not look like it but I have lots of experience with raising children, other than Tsunade of course."
Anime & Comics · Beat_Man
You changed the picture of the work so suddenly that I even lost it for a moment
ch 109 107. The Aftermath, The Regret, The Promise & A Bone Chilling Performance and A New Year.
Movies · TheRamenLord
finally
ch 83 Chapter 83: Legacy of the Gryphon - A Witcher's Fate
Book&Literature · TitoVillar
Oh, I forgot what kind of core he had again?)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))....pls
[You killed it effortlessly and got it's Divine core, Void Star Dragon Core. You also used it's body to reforge your Chains of Heaven.]
Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
Finally, I realized what bothers me about this story. His words, dialogues, all this is strange to me, I don’t know how to explain it correctly, but his statements seem to be too correct, too idealistic. These phrases seem to have been torn out of some isekai story, where the hero was at first a simpleton with a pure heart, and then he is abruptly betrayed and he becomes strong, gloomy, smart, etc. But here... it was as if Midoriya had never fallen from the roof and his hopes and dreams had never been crushed by his idol. I understand that, roughly speaking, he is a completely different Midoriya, a different personality, but apart from his changed attitude towards his mother (which is actually excellent, but in my opinion, again there is too much dialogue, like: {Inko - Izuku, I prepared you have a bento! Midoriya - Oh my god...Mom, knowing that this is your bento, I understand that you put your soul, love, friendship, happiness and the like into it. It means everything to me.} I'M NOT SAYING THAT THIS IS BAD. I say that there is a lot of this strange dialogue in my opinion again.) and the newfound confidence that stems from his different life and system. These sad, I would even say terrifying, events had almost no effect on his attitude towards the world around him.
I swept my gaze over the room, taking in the faces of my classmates. "Everyone here has worked hard to get to this point. They're just as much competition as you and I are."
Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
"This is the new offering from [UnderArmor], a company that I have recently invested in." His muscles well clearly defined under the shirt, his biceps, pecs, abs, shoulder delts, all were in perfect display.
Movies · TheRamenLord
What is it, man?
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: College
Anime & Comics · Franklin237
It would be better for him to have items that can do a rollback on his health. Something like Jashin’s curse or Natural energy (a concept, much was not revealed in Naruto and there were different types of energy besides the main ones as far as I remember). And later let Naruto make/come up with a way to quickly regenerate himself. And reviving directly from the System seems unnecessary; Naruto already has many possibilities.
ch 139 Chapter no.136 Vs Crystal Release
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
"I understand, Steve. Constant vigilance."
Movies · TheRamenLord
This...This...This is Danzo-chan... he-he-he
"Ara~ it breaks my heart when you only look for me during your times of need,
Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
He then pulled his right hand back like he was nocking an arrow, which he was. The tip of the flaming arrow was on his index and middle finger.
Anime & Comics · some_writer
Anabeth was there, Luke stayed at the camp
ch 66 Chapter 66
Movies · UchihaFamily
long?)
  Although the Usurper War has ended for almost a year, the negative effects of the war have not ended. The supporters of the Long family have not been completely eliminated. A large number of them hid in the mountains and forests after the defeat, and there The savage tribes mingled together and came out to plunder from time to time.
TV · azzari
good
ch 0 1 New Beginnings
Anime & Comics · some_writer
I'm currently reading two fanfictions at the same time. Yours and one about Naruto. And just now I caught such a hard brain lag
"Well the Naruto team has 2 teams of 6 professionals each and they are working in rotations so that they can have a few days of break and relaxation."
Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
Movies · TheRamenLord