Luminas_Rae - Profile

I will try to meet your expectations as best as possible, have a nice evening/morning and enjoy the sun today I will be going to the beach later haha! farewell, dear reader!

No problem, but I don't write the underestimated tropes so don't worry too much. In future I will also consider this point for readers like yourself and make it feel less nerfing more interesting and fun! The naivety will only last till the end of volume one, normally I don't write this type of MC however felt a lot of inspiration to have him this way, more pure and innocent and falling into depravity and adulthood within the story without using the tropes of 'Gf betrayal' or 'Cucked Mc' to force his growth. I hope you can stick with it, I'm sorry I cannot reply in Spanish! Thank you for the feedback.

I don't like power creep, or the concept of getting things for nothing. I thank you for your input greatly! However, not all skills begin as something amazing. This certain skill was chosen from the very beginning before I even decided on how the system would work mostly for the simple reason of not allowing the MC to get too strong to trivialise all threats or encounters. Once maxed out, the skill itself will evolve, removing the power balancing factor completely. I strongly dislike the trope of the MC getting super powerful items/abilities/skills and not having any sort of negatives, troubles or failures.

Authors Self review after rewriting from scratch! Writing Quality: 3/5 Since I don't know what level my own writing is compared to others, since when I read others it feels completely different and I don't like to compare! So I couldn't give myself 5 stars shamelessly, thanks to readers help I have improved my writing and editing slowly over the past few weeks (Hopefully.) Stability of Updates: 5/5 Currently aiming for at least 7 chapters a week more depending on how it is received by readers and support. Currently I am enjoying writing it so much I have over 20 sheets of written drafts some even the same chapter written differently haha! Character Design: 5/5 Well I love my characters, I try not to stick to the same in each of my novels(apart from handsome.) The MC in this novel is a dark elf/demon hybrid with caramel skin like a beautiful sandy desert using mostly two handed swords and hand to hand combat. The women are going to be mostly Non-humans and Beastmen for those who like that kind of stuff. If I don't love my own character design then who will? World Background: 5/5 The world I've begun to build is a total upgrade from the original novel, adding the various religions and now starting to build on them, crafting a larger world of the planet Marian. If you're interested in a Western fantasy Harem with many women with varying personalities with large *plot* and plot in the story and not a collect them all pokemon novel, please give the novel a try. If you enjoy the novel or find things you dislike, feel free to comment and let me know so I can improve!