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An aspiring novice writer, who loves to read and write all types of novels.

2022-06-16 Joined United Kingdom

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Replied to Kooshtastic

thanks for the comment, I originally had it as a bracelet then read about dark elves wat paint and markings in a dnd campaign and thought I'd try this approach!

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Replied to bobuchiha

I will try to meet your expectations as best as possible, have a nice evening/morning and enjoy the sun today I will be going to the beach later haha! farewell, dear reader!

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Replied to bobuchiha

No problem, but I don't write the underestimated tropes so don't worry too much. In future I will also consider this point for readers like yourself and make it feel less nerfing more interesting and fun! The naivety will only last till the end of volume one, normally I don't write this type of MC however felt a lot of inspiration to have him this way, more pure and innocent and falling into depravity and adulthood within the story without using the tropes of 'Gf betrayal' or 'Cucked Mc' to force his growth. I hope you can stick with it, I'm sorry I cannot reply in Spanish! Thank you for the feedback.

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Replied to bobuchiha

I don't like power creep, or the concept of getting things for nothing. I thank you for your input greatly! However, not all skills begin as something amazing. This certain skill was chosen from the very beginning before I even decided on how the system would work mostly for the simple reason of not allowing the MC to get too strong to trivialise all threats or encounters. Once maxed out, the skill itself will evolve, removing the power balancing factor completely. I strongly dislike the trope of the MC getting super powerful items/abilities/skills and not having any sort of negatives, troubles or failures.

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Replied to trickster_

Thanks for reading!

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Replied to trickster_

the number will increase with every job rank, so apprentice > novice > fledgling . I wanted a way to control his ability from just being a collect em all simulator and more of something that grew with him as his own skills as a mercenary leader did. starting with 5 felt like a good size. I hope you enjoy future chapters!

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Replied to Lucien1

just rereading it made me sigh deeply in my soul like watching arsenal play last season

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Replied to Lucien1

Sorry! this was a parody of all the Chinese novels I've read.

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Authors Self review after rewriting from scratch! Writing Quality: 3/5 Since I don't know what level my own writing is compared to others, since when I read others it feels completely different and I don't like to compare! So I couldn't give myself 5 stars shamelessly, thanks to readers help I have improved my writing and editing slowly over the past few weeks (Hopefully.) Stability of Updates: 5/5 Currently aiming for at least 7 chapters a week more depending on how it is received by readers and support. Currently I am enjoying writing it so much I have over 20 sheets of written drafts some even the same chapter written differently haha! Character Design: 5/5 Well I love my characters, I try not to stick to the same in each of my novels(apart from handsome.) The MC in this novel is a dark elf/demon hybrid with caramel skin like a beautiful sandy desert using mostly two handed swords and hand to hand combat. The women are going to be mostly Non-humans and Beastmen for those who like that kind of stuff. If I don't love my own character design then who will? World Background: 5/5 The world I've begun to build is a total upgrade from the original novel, adding the various religions and now starting to build on them, crafting a larger world of the planet Marian. If you're interested in a Western fantasy Harem with many women with varying personalities with large *plot* and plot in the story and not a collect them all pokemon novel, please give the novel a try. If you enjoy the novel or find things you dislike, feel free to comment and let me know so I can improve!

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Replied to Yack6

As it is only a fraction of the sin, the effect isn't as drastic as the original owner. (Notice how she almost killed Claire just for getting close to his body in another dimension.) -- For me Envy is closer towards jealousy, slightly missing this viewpoint. -- I will look more into those issues once he gets closer to them emotionally, currently he isn't in love with anyone yet (even Claire.) Maybe I can look into the extremities of Envy once he develops deeper feelings for them. (although the reasons for him not caring has a logical reason and you will find out after the next few chapters!) I appreciate your input greatly!

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Replied to Celestial_Chaos24

It will be quite a large harem, with a set of Main wives, followed by concubines who are still important and get screen time. (Almost everyone who remembers their lives will be part of the harem.) Not sure about incest, however, won't completely rule it out until the very end! Thanks for reading

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Replied to Celestial_Chaos24

This novel won't be dropped, I just had a large plot Point next and taking time writing the drafts and planning properly and posting a few chapters for my other novels so they are all roughly the same number of chapters released, thank you for reading!

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Replied to mywanderleiii

Obrigado por ter lido o capรญtulo! Vou ter suas ideias em consideraรงรฃo, e sub classes vรฃo eventualmente ser adicionadas de forma a que ele nรฃo seja muito forte de forma abusiva! Entรฃo esperem por isso para que ele nรฃo seja um senhor de harem que se torne peso morto! (Written by my legit waifu.)

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Replied to Empyrium

Will check it out when I get home, super hot day and overtime work the grind continues. Have a great day!

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