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It's good that he finally can regain normal regeneration but i don't understand why he didn't use aurelia's Blood to form his new bloodline.

I didn't understand, of ras'al ghoul didn't want to fight with the MC why he attacked first and why lady Shiva think that someone that killed a 5000 years old immortal Is in the same league as her daughter when even her can't kill someone like Vandal Savage.

It's really good but i don't understand why he didn't claim his father immortality in the same way he get the Power of Flash ... Or why he didn't awalen that Power himself.

I didn't like the fact that the MC attacked Malfoy in a fit of rage while also ignoring the Slytherin rule of being united outside the common room and that any possible confrontation must be handled internally, I hope this has consequences both for the protagonist and Malfoy.

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This story was dropped? If so i Will be really sad, it's a very good story.

I love this story, the only flaw is the low number of chapters.

Up to now the story Is really good, i Hope that the Main Character don't change to the good side and he still be evil even in the late stage of the novel.

I don't understand why Ron went to Hogwarts using his father's car and why the Bludgers attacks Harry, in the original series it was Dobby who caused the two accidents but in this fanfic Dobby was killed.

I don't like the way the main character changes Kreacher because as far as I know house elves need to be tied to the magic of a house or wizard to survive and take joy in serving the house or wizard they serve magically bonded unless they consider their current master or mistress unworthy, but this doesn't seem to be the case with Kreacher since he respects Walburga a lot and has designated the protagonist as his successor.

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I would prefer the plot to be as realistic as possible but I would like the main character not to lose at the crucial moment when he has to fight for something really important like his dragon or maybe his future wife or girlfriend.

I think she's Medusa. The little anecdote from the previous chapter where she claims that his head was cut off by his lover reminds me of when Perseus cut off the head of Medusa to use her petrification powers to defeat the kraken.

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